Black Poetry : THE WOMAN IN ME: November Trilogy #3

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Hunter, Nov 19, 2001.

  1. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Have you seen the
    The woman in me?

    Tell her that
    I would like to meet her
    I've heard rumors
    About her arrival
    And I am
    So very anxious
    To greet her

    No
    I didn't know
    That she was sexy
    Or
    That the spread of her hips
    Could broaden her smile

    No one told me
    That she wore
    Tight panties
    Or that
    Her firm buttocks
    Were still in style

    I heard
    That she preferred
    Sexin'
    While still standing
    Up against the wall

    And
    That she
    Caressed the colors
    Of her vagina
    While she was waiting
    For her lover to call

    I thought
    She was looking
    For November

    But I see
    That October
    Has decided to stay

    And
    Her brown eyes
    Will gaze
    Past December

    But
    The nail polish
    On her toes
    Will dry
    While she waits

    Have you seen
    The woman in me?

    Tell her
    That I said

    To stay


    Hunter
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  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am smiling in my November

    morning....

    it is complete....and I don't know who coined it first....but I fully believe the "old" woman has officially "left the building".

    thank you for bringing this one again. :)

    much love to you this day!

    a
     
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    NO...

    i haven't seen her
    but i would love to meet her
    i hear she has some words to share
    ...in a style that's rare
    and only hers.:)

    have you seen her?
    if you do,
    tell her i'm looking for her.
     
  4. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SHE IS WITHIN THEE AND ABOUT THEE!

    MY SISTA , I KNOW THIS JOURNEY WELL
    AND A BRIEF STORY I WOULD LIKE TO TELL...
    The woman in you
    that you speak
    and you seek
    be within thee
    the speaker
    the seducer
    the teacher
    the reacher
    the preacher
    the scribe who flow where only a real woman dare go!
    For she is within thee, and about thee!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
    EXCELLENT SCRIBE, SUPERIOR AND ILLUMINATING CONTENT!
     
  5. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So take that old coat off....

    and hang it in the memory closet.....

    and put on the new one you just bought.....it looks just right sittin there on your shoulders....don't leave the house without...it's cold outside....

    K
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    looking glass

    of true u in vibe
     
  7. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmmmm yup

    Hunter, the woman in me loves the woman in you for being woman enough to bring it like only you do




    One
     
  8. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    UbZoRbShUn
    could not have said it any better... You delivered as usual
    ! feeling this woman on red and yellow leafs..

    Mr M
     
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