Black Poetry : The Window Of Your Spirit

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SpiritualONE, Jul 22, 2003.

  1. SpiritualONE

    SpiritualONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I stare deeply into your spiritual soul

    and realize the awesome love that your body holds

    A love that spans the edges of the universe

    That captures my mind by putting sadness in reverse



    A love that blooms like a beautiful flower

    That surrounds the cosmos while projecting its power

    A love that fills the earth with a heavenly fragrance

    Melting moist and sweet to the very depths of my soul.



    Your eyes have been the window to your spirit

    But the energy you emanate has me wrapped in it

    I cherish a moment of profound spirituality when I'm thinking of you

    Because the Window to your Spirit reveals a DEEP love that is true.

    By SpiritualONE
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    On the ONE!
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loving this
    feeling this
    wonderful srcibe.:heart:

    Peace
     
  4. SpiritualONE

    SpiritualONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the positive feedback!
     
  5. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The feedback is postive because this scribes vibe is positive :)
    flow on :)
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderfull wonderfull wonderfull............................!



    much love libertylaida!
     
  7. SpiritualONE

    SpiritualONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (((((Taking a Bow))))))

    Thank you!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was too sweet well posed and beautifully sprayed
    i love it when the flow is scribed like dis
    ya pen is awesome
     
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