Black Poetry : The Window (lyrics to my new song)

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  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Look through the window-
    Tell me what do you see?
    A beautiful planet
    In peace and harmony- harmony- harmony"

    I see my people struggling- I see their negativity
    I see their blind eyes glued to the lies on the silver screen
    I make time to love them - I take time to hug them
    I understand I must even though I don't trust them
    A friend once told me, " Never mind their ignorance
    We're in this together -Lurk- don't stop your influence"
    In time this divine notion- I motion to the skies
    So I can find hope in it and blow a hole through the lies!
    I see a war children fighting that doesn't make sense
    I see regrets of their mothers and their fathers neglect
    And my brothers are all vain- material things
    Got their priorities twisted causing miserable scenes
    And I'm doing the same- living in a dream
    There ain't a single thing out there that makes us wanna believe
    I see drones and clones but I don't see this all lastin'
    A world gone mad with a great lack of passion now thats tragic
    Ugh!

    "Look through the window-
    Tell me what do you see?
    A beautiful planet
    In peace and harmony- harmony- harmony"

    I feel a great deal of joy- a great deal of pain
    I feel hopeful in my own mental plane
    I feel the suns rays shine through and graze my face
    We save our love for tomorrow but let's show our love to today!
    A man once told me,"there's much more to all of this
    We all have a purpose - I hope that yours exist "
    And with that I had to go back and do some soul searchin'
    Looking out my window I can feel my soul hurtin'
    What lies behind the curtain- pull the blinds back
    I feel my soul yearnin'- Inside is where it hides at
    And I'm learnin' that I feel much disgust for this mistrust
    But I know that it's real -It's just a mix up, and guess what?
    I feel brave knowing that a change will happen
    The same plan that gave away our love will attract it
    I feel grateful for my life because I see it all lastin'
    My beautiful people this is a beautiful planet - Now that's magic!
    Ugh

    "Look through the window-
    Tell me what do you see?
    A beautiful planet
    In peace and harmony- harmony- harmony"


    Please email me for a copy of the song..
    I'm releasing it as my first single for the new record and I really hope
    people get the message..It's one of those things..: )
    You guys are getting the first exclusive listen..

    Oh and

    Hi?Whats new with you all ?


    -Lurk Uno
     
  2. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    :terrific:

    Great lyrics, Lurk! I wish you well with it's success! We need some positive music out here for a change!


    This was my favorite part:

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da whip of lyrics and flava to this joint gonna be phat fo sho ....do it bruh !
     
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    I'm loving this, speaking to our perspective on society and each other. I appreciate you sharing your lyrics with us.
     
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    this was tight son....i definitely want a copy of the cut
    when u finish it....good to see u holmes....

    one love
    khasm
     
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    I think the positivity is raidiant and the rhythm is smooth :)
    Im drop my offering in the bucket just let me know where to buy :)
    Heres to wishing you nothing but success mi hermano :) :wave:
     
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    Thanks for the love fam.
    I forgot where I can post up the link to the song
    I remember I did it here once and Rich "reprimanded" me for doing so but told me where I can
    If yall know that'll be great. I can have it up by tomorrow.

    Peace
    -Lurk
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yo

    you already "KNOW" how i feel about this, you, your work

    and your moms lol

    hahahaahahahaha

    you KNOW I had to get a laugh

    :hi:

    you know i'm feeling this

    when you have this laced

    post it here if you can and let them hear how you bring this
     
  9. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you know it DSS!

    Posting the song first thing manana....

    uNo
     
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