Black Haiku : the wind

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  1. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    the wind embraces me
    gusting in and through my core
    blowing me with love
     
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    As the breeze, blowing
    tenderly, swirls through the trees
    gentle love lingers
     
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    It puckers it's lips
    as if to slowly exhale
    Then swooshhhhh! A sweet breeze
     
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    soothing great breeze
    I flow along with its tide
    roll me up in it
     
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    Billowing, below
    Lifting my feet off the ground
    I’m walking on air...​




    000000000
     
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    Up, up to the sky
    dancing all over the heavenly clouds
    as the breeze takes me away​
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    i'm walking on air
    the clouds encircle my feet
    oooh where is the wind?!
     
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    The wind is right there
    Behind every hidden thought
    Coaxing the words out
     
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    Here? I breathe again
    missed rushing entering swoosh
    air letting me live
     
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    Unseen force of GOD
    reminds us we're just humans
    take cover with fear :bawling:

    Respecting nature
    living...enjoying the wind
    I feel so alive :jumping:
     
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