Black Poetry : The Wind

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  1. SayWord

    SayWord Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baby
    You're like the wind.
    I'm standing outside right now,
    It's not hot
    It's not cold.
    A cool gust of wind hits me
    It engulfs me
    I close my eyes
    And I feel just right.
    Your love is like that wind.
    It hits me
    It engulfs me
    I close my eyes
    And it feel just rights.
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow...
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was simply beautiful!

    This was one of those classic , love poems..."easy like Sunday morning"!
    Do yo thang Poet!

    Blessings On Your House!
     
  4. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooooooooooooo, likin this very much. :)
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis be tyte
    flowed just right
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow i like this
     
  7. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was very nice...much love
     
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