Black Poetry : The wind and the breeze

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  1. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The wind swept up my pain
    Taking it to places I could
    Never reach by land or sea
    Leaving me vulnerable to joy;

    The breeze tickled my senses
    Inviting happiness to visit as I
    Rested in moments of reminisce
    Of long lost unfulfilled aspirations;

    The wind grab my long history
    Pulling it left and right shaking
    Out the things that kept me from
    Growing, leaving my true purpose;

    The breeze kissed my motivation
    Inspiring me to continue through
    The wilderness and narrowed paths
    To a place of clay’s reformation;

    The wind grab the voices of doubt
    Spinning them in a twister of truth
    With gust so loud that I am deafened
    By the high pitch voices of success;

    The breeze embraced my life gently
    Reaching within me to find those places
    Where true love exists and trust runs free
    Awaiting another vessel to pour into…
     
  2. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your words are **** near hypnotic. Kids should be studying you in school!!!!
     
  3. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks you for your words...you bring joy to the meadow...

    i am quieted today... :D
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    D.


    ... i needed the calming effects of the
    wind & the breeze on this Monday.
    this piece is beautiful serenity... Thank You.

    AlwaysPeace.
    SunShyne~
     
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    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You sure that your middle name ain't Jesus, cause you sure reply like he would, kind of like in a parable. I just think you're awesome!
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am honored Danilyn, but no my middle name isn't Jesus, but, i'll tell you a secret..My middle name stands for "comforter"

    GA, you are always welcome to visit the meadow...

    thank you both for the read...
     
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    Alright twin I'm feeling ya here...this gives me that smooth, tranquil and serene feel...aka peace

    ***pssst...that's the way you rep for the twins***

    blak
     
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    nothing less than a tranquil day...

    nfinite,
    jh
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    twin, you bring da fire and i bring da wind...both are in need of each other for theri voices to sing...thanks for the sharpening bro'

    j'hiah, you my frined bring the serenity that play effortlessly with the peace. it is always a joy to see the prophets of the room visiting the meadow...
     
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    :cry: STOP THAT!!! YOU making me cry... :bawling:

    :crying: seriously...thanks for the read and those words...you always stop by and leave seeds for the birds of the meadow...

    i am honored...
     
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