Black Poetry : the wild part

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by gempis, Sep 3, 2003.

  1. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A wise woman once told me
    - there's a wild part of you that's never been touched -
    she's correct
    sometimes
    I feel a trace
    hear a whisper....
    velvet seas of
    emotion
    unbridled laughter
    emancipation
    joining the others
    wide open sky
    made only to fly
    allowing, even celebrating
    union and pleasure
    love not out of
    the question but
    the answer....
    yet
    the wild is buried
    underneath no and
    I don't want to need
    beneath anger and
    I don't believe
    below distrust and
    apathy
    so far down it's
    not a priority
    rarely, though,
    I do feel curiosity
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow! i feel it too
    let it all out
     
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    this is nice
    really
     
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    lol u too huh? :) yeah mine gets out more than it should lol :)
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$, msblkangel, triniti, thanks so much for the love.

    :grouphug:
     
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    what a deep flow. yeah i feel that way often!
     
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    I agree, there is an untapped often wild side to us all. I liked the way you penned this one, speaking about being open to all sorts of possiblities.
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GEMPIS this was good but let me drop these lines

    My pride strange like criminals with a wide range of chemicals
    Include acids and rude plastics protrude drastic and subliminal
    Like a beast food I spoil with grease and oil, this script rapes
    And grip fakes throat like Jack The Ripper then flip skates
    Like Kurt Thomas, hurt to promise Olympic gold medal
     
  9. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    my wild part always had a head start....:lol:
    i likes this blast from da past...
    one love
    khasm
     
  10. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love the flow gempis keep on doin the **** thang...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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