Black Poetry : the whisperer

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  1. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the whisperer

    who's that whispering in the willows?
    all in my bedroom like the pillows
    hidden in cigars, cigarettes and cigarillos
    better stay in your shell like armadillos

    you have no spine, no color, no time
    no soul, no gold, no flow, no rhyme
    oh, i'm aware of your history from the origin
    but, do you know who i am? think again

    blink again and i'm gone, not racing i'm running
    from your cunning little voice that once was stunning

    i've lost faith in your suggestions now i want facts
    spoken loudly and proudly so, let's chat

    actions are louder than words, see what i'm saying?
    qouting knowing oceans started flowing from a conversation

    your whispers tickle my eardrum so I play a soulful beat
    to override your foolish pride what was that? peace:peace:

    wa salakem to you too, brother
    selah, salaam, and shalom
    you can speak to me like a man
    and whisper when i'm gone

    actions ARE louder than words
    gunshots, accidents, and screams
    all from a whisper
    from a thought.. from a dream

    do i dare listen to gossip, slander, and backstabbing
    i just shamelessly walk away while the fools stay laughing

    you are so subtle and deceptive i almost didn't see
    isn't he? could it be? used to be... me, the whisperer
    -Sha'iyn:gossip:
     
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    yea people will hate on you

    for doing the right thing

    yes i see you are very composed

    and that's a positive

    stand your ground poet

    and you'll be fine



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    Oftentimes what is truly strong, isn't loud and boisterous, it is quiet and unassuming with much power lurking underneath. Welcome to Destee. Looking forward to reading more from you, much enjoyed the read.
     
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    welcome within surely u made the sound and steps in da right direction
    this was outstanding and love da vibe of it the message hit hard..........
     
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