Black Poetry : the weak one

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by divine_1, Dec 9, 2003.

  1. divine_1

    divine_1 Active Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Oct 18, 2003
    Messages:
    44
    Likes Received:
    0
    Occupation:
    Life Long Learner
    Ratings:
    +0
    i, the weak one
    but only when no one is looking
    when their glance is adverted
    to seemingly more important things,
    the weak one appears...
    she appears as a smart comment
    or a whisper or a scream
    she appears as a living night mare
    or a fantasy like dream.
    She pounces on the opportunity
    to look away from u'r eyes
    Cuz that's the seat of truth
    and she isnt able to be disguised.
    She is humility
    absentmindedly ignorantly accepting
    all the crap pushed toward her.
    She is rage
    pushing everything comforting away,
    Even though she has a dying need to be held close
    But she sheilds herself from the outside world
    appearing only when it's too rough outside
    speaking through poetry and pain
    paper stained with tears
    but none of that is evident
    when the next day appears
    for she can't show herself to the world
    being known is one of her biggest fears.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    now i read u so well here and yes the fears of being known
    tyte drop poet
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Aug 26, 2003
    Messages:
    12,660
    Likes Received:
    191
    Location:
    somewhere ova da rainbow....
    Ratings:
    +219
    i likes this..
    very nice drop..:angel1:
     
  4. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 5, 2003
    Messages:
    4,020
    Likes Received:
    32
    Occupation:
    strength coach
    Location:
    Seattle, WA
    Ratings:
    +32
    girl I feel this, and I really really like this. flow on, please, yes.
     
Loading...