Black Poetry : The way....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Euphoria, Sep 10, 2002.

  1. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love
    Waking and seeing you looking at me and knowing that you were watching me long before I woke,
    I love
    The way you kiss me each morning, even if I have morning breath,
    I love
    The way you stare at me and whisper that you think I'm beautiful,
    I love
    That the very thought of you brings a smile to my lips
    I love
    The way that you make love to me,
    I love
    It when you suprise me, whether it be with flowers, or an unexpected kiss,
    I love
    The way we can hold each other for hours and not have to say a word,
    I love
    The fact that when I'm down you always say the right thing,
    I love
    The way you gaze at me in a room full of people and I know that you want me as much as I want you,
    I love
    Knowing that no matter where we are, we're always there for each other,
    I love
    The way you hold me tight when we sleep at night,
    I love
    That you are my best friend as well as my lover,
    I love
    The way that you love me.


    5/9/02
    *Emma*
     
  2. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I LOVE THA WAY YOU JJUST TOLD IT LIKE IT IZ GURL...
    GWAN W/ THAT GOOD SHHHHH!!

    YA MAN SHOULD FEEL DA SAME WAY.....OR ELSE
    HOMEBOY DON'T KNO WHUT HE HAS!!
    ONE.........
     
  3. misty

    misty Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice piece..!!!
    What a wonderful feeling.
    :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    see what true real love can be
    as from above i watch thee
    i love da way u vibe in scribe
    to perfection
    continue da love thang!
     
  5. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LURK - Thanks for 'preciatin. Yeh my man knows what he's got... ;)

    Misty - It's the first time I've ever felt like this and I'm lovin it.

    Rich - Thank u so much for your love and support.
     
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    emma.


    ...your love poetry always makes me smile! :)

    i loved the sweet honesty flowing throughout this
    entire piece. it made me reminicse & reflect on all
    the best things about being in love. thank you for
    sharing, my dear. :)

    itsallLove, chile!

    elayne.
     
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    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this had me :D from ear to ear and :( from missing mine near....VERY sweet drop!
     
  8. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    elayne - Yay, my purpose was reached. I posted this poem in the hope that it would make people reminicse. Thank you.

    LiLi - Thanks for taking the time to read my piece and I'm gald you liked it.

    :)

    *Emma*
     
  9. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love in it's truest form...beautiful 'peace'
    :)