Black Poetry : The way you....

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  1. 4g0tt3n_Canc3r

    4g0tt3n_Canc3r Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When i think of you
    your smile...
    the way you
    part your lips
    makes my heart do flips
    and I swear
    I'm in heaven for a while.

    when you speak to me
    your voice...
    the way you
    say my name
    sends fire through my veins
    and sweetheart
    you are my drug of choice.

    When you look at me
    those eyes...
    the way they
    see past lies
    and unveil my disguise
    and you see
    with you, my devotion lies

    when you touch me
    your hands...
    the way they
    caress me here
    and hold my body near
    it feels so
    safe, i have no fear

    when you kiss me
    your lips...
    the way they
    lightly brush mine
    then our tongues intertwine
    and my heart
    is yours and yours mine



    when you LOVE me
    your heart...
    the way you
    shared it with me
    the future i could never see
    in my life
    you are the best part




    Ignorance leads to more ignorance...lets end that cycle
    ~4g0tt3n
     
  2. Clyde C Coger Jr

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa and Real Truth!

    The way you.......affect me



    Sounds like somebodies in love, nice write poetess. And do continue to come back home e'r now and a gin, 4g0tt3n_Canc3r:)

     
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    feeling all the warmth of love from this joint
     
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    love just do something to us dont it? really enjoyed your poem
     
  5. Clyde C Coger Jr

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    Amen to that sister, for real:)