Black Poetry : the way you....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by toylin, Dec 13, 2005.

  1. toylin

    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    honey baby dontchu know
    i love you thinkin of you
    every night and day
    in every way
    sugah dontchu know
    this thang we got goin on
    is so wrong got me wonderin
    how long
    can i stand the pain
    got me itchin my thoughts
    aint christian in the
    slightest bit
    need a hit need a taste
    feel my heart race
    while i'm
    tossin and turnin
    my mind is burnin
    stomach churnin
    i'm feelin good today
    lost in your arms
    overwhelmed by the charms
    you used to disarm
    me let down my guard
    theres a song in my body
    boy you play me like a
    violin
    aint this a sin
    to feel this good
    can you keep a secret
    this is gettin heated
    first time i remember
    feelin like this
    can i call it bliss
    when i felt your kiss
    upon my lips
    is it me you're out to devour
    hour after hour
    my limbs quiver like a flower
    in the spring breeze
    the way you
    tease me
    please
    dont release me
    keep me captive i this dream
    oh you make it seem
    like i'm the only worthy
    woman satisfaction guaranteed
    make me wanna plead
    fall down on my knees
    baby baby please
    overcome by sleep
    you make me wanna weep
    tears of joy runnin down
    my face cuz you always
    take me to that place...
    ...ecstacy
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    taken to dat place
    where hearts can trace
    and face the tide
    where ecstacy reside
    in da sleeping hollow
    and the warmth morrow
    the way u where
    how it is
    taken me back to yes
    them sweet years
    this flowed so smoothly and cascade out tyte
     
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    the way you is a very nice flow, flow on toylin
     
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    The ectasy is deep
    In here sister
    That was love poet
    Its powerful to say the least
     
  5. toylin

    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :) I feel special.
     
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    This scribe of free flowing thoughts read so smoothly. I'll bet it sounds great read aloud. Keep those flows coming.
     
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    Keep me captive sister
     
  8. toylin

    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you all like this. I thought it was a bit disjointed myself. Although, when I wrote it, I was thinking out loud, and there was some hip hop stutter beat playing... and here you go! Thanks.