Black Poetry : The Way You Love Me

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if you could see
    You
    loving me…
    from my point of view
    i mean… for just
    one moment in tyme
    if you could gaze
    upon the phenomenon
    that is…
    You
    while looking thru
    my eyes…
    you would see
    what i feel
    when i tell you
    how…
    very good it is
    being loved by you
    at first glance…
    you'll be entranced
    thinking to yourself
    this must be…
    some kind of
    rose hued optical ill(You)sion
    but it ain’t…
    (it’s the real thing)
    then… the whole world
    will fade away &
    the only thing
    that will mean any thing
    …will be the beating
    of your heart…
    & that’s just the start
    cause peripheral is
    too nonessential to
    describe the vision
    reflecting from my eyes
    when I… hold you
    in my syght…
    & isn’t that the way that
    love’s supposed to be?
    you know…
    so intense that I wish
    (if just for an instant)
    you could see…
    the way you love me


    © SunShyneOrygynals 2001, all rights
     
  2. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My gurl...

    I have read you enough to know...that the dialogue is key to your flow

    You have a very thank-ful spirit...and you poetry always reflects your gratitude...your appreciation of the love you are so blessed to receive

    When he comes to you.....he will in turn....thank you

    I hear you gurl...

    *grace*

    :heart:
     
  3. Bigdiggyd5

    Bigdiggyd5 Member MEMBER

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    OKAY I'VE HEARD ENOUGH.. IF ONLY THIS COULD BE POSSIBLE LOVE WOULD NEVER BE THE SAME. I THINK YOU HAVE JUST SUMMED UP A WOMANS TRUE WISH! BOY OH BOY YOU GO GIRL YOU GO TELL IT LIKE IT IS NOTIN BUT LOVE GURL:toast: :toast: :toast: :toast: :toast: :toast: :toast: :toast: :toast: :toast: :toast: :toast:
     
  4. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sunshyne Lady

    there isn't anything more wonder- full than the beauty loves makes....

    I'm feelin you strongly, sis! Have MERCY

    flow now!

    a
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Essence of Love....

    You never sieze to amaze. Once again you have put down a master piece... Cause i am truly lovin this....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOAH!

    JUST THE THOUGHT COZ LOVE
    IS TRUELY U AND I STAND IN AWEEE!!
    SLAP YO RAYZ DOWN ON US AGAIN QUEEN :cool: :D
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hunter. MY Gurl!... Your response touched me...
    more than you know. Thank YOU! & ThatsReal. :)

    BDD. icons in the hands of the wrong person can
    be dangerous! :lol: THanks Sweetie! you know how much
    i appreciate cha!

    Alyce. ...Sister Dear... if you feelin' me... then i know
    errythang gon be aight!! :)

    Sha-Sha. you're soooo good to me!! thanks for
    showing a sistah some love... share this wit our sweetie! :)

    $$RICHNE$$. i'll keep slappin' those rayz down... as
    long as you keep basking in the SunShyne... :wink:
     
  8. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Goodness girl!

    You keep this up and mama's
    gonna have to buy me some
    more pencils. I done used up
    all the ink in my pens...:D

    *In 'scribble' mode*
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i can see doe i'm really not there
    a sight so rare
    none can compare
    so i try not to stare

    two companions
    so demandin'
    time and understandin'
    and every things turns to candy

    i can see doe but i can't see the color
    friend? lover?
    new horizons to discover
    either way we won't suffer

    one in a million
    check the feelin'
    str9 sky no ceilin'
    and so appealin'

    can you taste it in your taste buds
    no dud
    all thud
    with a touch of love
    cuz

    so what you saying in columbus
    trust dis
    it's the ball park franks and the mustard

    hold up hold up
    don't run

    you forgot the bun




    ;)
    DSS
     
  10. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gurl, this is simply just a lovely piece...has he read this one, yet, dear friend? he needs to. and ya know that i'm lovin' it! very nicely written, it is.

    ~~~chaptersoflove~~~
     
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