Black Poetry : The Way You Beg

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Shani, Oct 3, 2002.

  1. Shani

    Shani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello Everyone, I'm new to Destee forums. I've had a look around and I definitely like what I see- and heard- for that matter. I'm looking forward to reading and listening to more of your great poetry. *smiles*



    My smile, you say
    transforms grey into
    hot sizzling sun
    brightening dark areas
    of life that frighten some
    and cause others to give up
    in despair...

    My eyes, you say
    endless & deep, can cause
    the most hardened of hearts
    to melt into dripping surrender
    longing to swim
    -if only once-
    in their tender innocence...

    My skin, you say
    with it's own tantalizing
    flowery, sultry fragrance
    beckons even butterflies onto
    a collision course with me
    just to attempt a sample,
    a taste of pure magic

    My touch, you say
    is the true force behind
    electricity's shock,
    rocking the souls of the
    unwary into delirious heights
    of passion

    My love, you say
    is all that you ever needed
    to survive in this crazy sphere
    of a world where the only thing
    certain is uncertainty,
    and your love for me...

    Dearest lover,
    how I do love the way
    you beg...

    ~Shani{R.T.}
    10/00
     
  2. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    shani!


    welcome poet! welcome! :) i am definite-ly
    feelin' your flow, chile! as you'll come to know...
    i love me some love & you did a wonderful job
    with this peace! thanks for sharing!! & once
    again... welcome!

    itsallLove.

    elayne.
     
  3. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shani

    Welcome...you have made quite an entrance with your beautiful love poetry...

    I love your name too....

    K
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    FROM ABOVE I WELCOME U

    WELCOME WITHIN UPON FAMILY & FRIENDZ
    WELCOME TO DA PLACE OF DESTEE
    GLAD U LIKE WHAT U SEE AS WE LOVE WHAT U DO
    WELCOME FRIEND WITHIN DIS HOUSE
    FLOW LIKE U DO BE WHOM U R
    STAY A WHILE AND SHARE A FEW SMILES
    WE HAVE MUCH FOR U TOO DO WELCOME !!
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmm
    then allow me to
    beg...........you pardon
    for taking so long to get to you
    ...to this mistresspiece of
    poetic foreplay
    as i taste the touch
    of your passion
    and lash onto
    electricity's shock

    let the force be with you.:)

    welcome
    to the playground
     
  6. Shani

    Shani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, Elayne, Kitana, Rich, and Baller for the kind welcome. Lookin' forward to readin' all of you...

    *smiles*
    ~Shani
     
  7. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: Welcome to Destee Shani

    A Beautiful peace of poetry.



    Coco :heart:
     
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    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HELLO!! I'M LOVING THIS!!
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to the fam....have a seat...kick back with some red koolaid....I had some oreos but ubzorbshun ate them all up....and in case you need to relax...just follow the beacon of the lighthouse...the door is open .....come on in....
     
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    welcome!!
    what a way to make a grand entrance
    (and this is grand)
    i look forward to reading many more of
    your works of art!
    -7:spinstar: