Black Poetry : The Way She Chooses To Live Her Life

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  1. unfoolish1223

    unfoolish1223 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As the tears fall down her cheek
    she wonders how can this be..
    why cant people just love me
    for me...I know this aint suppost
    to be right, but this is how I feel
    deep inside...I love her
    and she sees wat I see...

    She's been with men before,
    but they brought her more pain
    than words can explain...she
    feels she cant give them a
    chance anymore...her heart
    is bruised and it can't be
    healed...all the men she's
    met have all been the same...

    They say there gonna call
    and never do..say they love
    you but just want to get in
    your pants....she can't
    take the lies, or the execuses
    that men are gonna be men..
    a real man will be there through
    thick and thin...never cheat...
    someone she never got a chance
    to meet...

    This is the way she chooses
    to live her life, but still people
    dont understand why...Love is
    something u can't control, and
    where your heart leads is
    where you go...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes yes yes !!
    feeling u here
    so true that's life
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man when I read this I thought I was talkin to myself lol,sounds just like me and some one I wanna reach to.
     
  4. unfoolish1223

    unfoolish1223 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yea i know a lot of people go through that feeling and I was one of them myself
     
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    gosh you are so on point
    with this drop
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    Yea, sometimes we wish we can talk our heart out of the decisions it makes. Deeply written.
     
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    .......................................speechles











    yes...somethimes you choose for somethings.....You make choices..
    and somethimes you just walk youre path....with everything that comes on youre way .You walk try to love youre brothers and sister and walk to be loved..
    i mean its written ...
    all the hairs on youre head are counted....
    but we all search for warmth ...
    a huge ...
    love...
    (on witch ofcourse number one we can find in god)




    Poet ....


    this poem here



    is.. me .....












    man or sista ..youre good...


    Exzactly ....some people think i choose to live like this...

    but i just wanted to give love and to be loved

    just like everyone wants...

    One thing i must admit ....
    i didnt loved my self enough as far as giving to much of myself the taking care of my Body as far as rest eat and stuff...
    wich took his tool at times
    even...
    now
    still i have to learn that...











    Lovelibertylady:heart: much much love to ya Poet...
     
  8. unfoolish1223

    unfoolish1223 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u for all your love and support and libertylady thank u and always love yourself no matter what and keep your head up that is something i am still learning to do day by day
     
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    WOW this was on point there are so many out there who have walked this path big ups to ya :) :grouphug:
     
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    this poem is so real
    so true to life for so many people
    this is a hot drop
     
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