Black Poetry : The way it should have been [part 1]

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  1. ShortyLove21

    ShortyLove21 Active Member MEMBER

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    Remember what happened just the other day.
    About that night I have something to say.
    You unbuttoned my clothes.
    And they fell to the floor.
    At first ...I felt dirty.
    And cheap like a w#@$!
    But there is something about the way you work that wood.
    The way you put it on me just felt so d#$@! good.
    That may have been my first time.
    But it won't be the last.
    I cringe at the thought of you putting in my a$#.
    It was hard enough to get it through the front.
    You made me high.
    Like I just smoked a blunt.
    Foreplay was fun.
    You kissed on my neck.
    With your long d@#$ my tight hole you stretched.
    You can tell that it hurt by the way that I screamed.
    My eyes roll with pleasure.
    Like in a love scene.
    Your love is so deep I feel it in my stomach.
    If it went any further I think that I'll vomit.
    You started liking all over my chest.
    Your d@#$ in my stomach.
    Your lips on my breasts.
    You turned off the light.
    And took off the rest of your clothes.
    I was so nervous so I laid there froze.
    Iam laying there thinking.
    When will you cum?
    I look again at the clock.
    When will it be done?
    Now that you have me.
    My body you have won.
    You wont slow down or stop til you have your fun.
    But then I see the signs.
    Your eyes roll in your head
    Toes curl and muscles stiffen.
    Your hands clench the bed
    Then all at once I felt your d@#$ make a motion.
    Outcome your cum but it didnt look like lotion
    You climb off of me
    D@#$ no longer hard
    You pull off the rubber
    Went from hard as a rock to soft as flubber
    Now that it is over
    I am relaxed and relieved
    You hold me in your arms and we both go to sleep
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :eeek: whoa ShortyLove21 lol

    WELCOME :)
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome !!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of peace & bond

    happy u join us in flow ................................

    maybe you didn't get a chance to read our rules
    to try to be as clean and neat with how we use
    words poetically this was tyte scribe and very woooweee!

    do try to keep it tone down a little
    we are so happy u here u home now welcome to the family
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well [email protected], its like that. lol nice flow and welcome to destee.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my...nice intro
    welcome to destee
     
  6. ShortyLove21

    ShortyLove21 Active Member MEMBER

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    Sorry about my writing. I cleaned it up as much as I could, but thanks to all of you for stopping by.
     
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    wow.....this is tyte.....wow...
     
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