Black Poetry : the way it is

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by onzhay, Nov 6, 2001.

  1. onzhay

    onzhay Active Member MEMBER

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    An even greater

    distance

    has been wedged

    between us...

    from our lack of exchanged words

    ...as if the miles were not enough


    And i don't know
    your contentment with the situation
    as it IS

    But i do know
    that the bond was real to me

    Was it or is it to you?

    I've begun the task of conditioning my heart
    to accept that i may never HEAR the answer

    But in SILENCE
    i'll still keep loving you...
    UNCONDITIONALLY

    (taking it like a big girl)

    Zhay
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel this....

    and in so many ways...."big girls" can take it, move on...keep living/loving....and make it...... with amazingly less baggage than the "big boys"..... (contrary to popular opinion)

    I love this

    thank you

    a
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Zhay,

    This was nice......I enjoyed the read....thanks:)

    Madd Sistahly Love :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    zhay big gurl in all

    hold ya head up and smile
    ya heart is ready for a new
    sound of love tunes
    what was ain't no more
    glad ya heart ready to move on!

    very well written...........:heart:
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    strong stuff

    somebody has it good
    they just haven't realize it yet


    and such strength here

    keep the head upright

    >DSSNY<
     
  6. onzhay

    onzhay Active Member MEMBER

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    many thanks to you...Alyce, RICH, Coco and DSSNY.

    keeping my head up

    zhay