Black Poetry : The way I see he, as if he were me.

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  1. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Surrounded by the masses,
    Of people whom Ive connected with,
    Baring no intention to become friends,
    Or see the bigger picture,
    Which is me.
    Family ties of D.N.A..
    My fellow xxy, xy brothers and sisters,
    Even my offspring,
    Cant see the he which is me.
    Im all alone,
    In my misery.
    Never is my pain felt in their hearts,
    Never do they see things from my eyes.
    Breaking the chains of my brain,
    My inner self is held in captivity,
    Longing to be free.
    I and my three,
    My three branches of me.
    When I’m with them my mind
    Reaches as close as it can to the being of “free”

    She whom I have never touched,
    Seem to know of so much of me.
    She’s taken a piece of me,
    And hidden it in a place I cannot see.
    Hidden in a hole in my heart,
    Bound for eternity,
    Lies all which is me.
    If one could possess all the pieces
    To fill the void in my heart,
    If she could possess the key,
    The hole would be closed,
    And my heart will heal,
    And my mind would be set free.
    Completing the enigma,
    Which I believe is the he,
    Which is really the me..
    Free.



    This was written for a very dear friend,
    who asked me to look within him,
    and share with the world how he feels.
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow Speechless Sister
    You really took me with this
    Hid it in a place you couldnt see
    My fellow xxy xy man that was hot
    I bow to you sweety
    Much Love deeply felt Sis
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love how you put it down on this one flo on poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaa! u looked deep and express it well
    this was too smooth sis wow!
     
  5. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dang dis waz deep
    now i can c wuh yo homeboi iz bout
    i luv dis drop
    frum yo sistah G.A



    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
  6. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YALL ..
    IM GLAD YALL LIKED IT..
    I BEN A LIL AWOL LATELY..
    BUT I GOTTA GET IT TOGETHER..
    BUT I WANTED TO LET YALL KNOW
    THAT I STILL GOT LOVE FOR YALL..
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    likewise baby girl the love floats the same ......miss ya !
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flow on,poet.
    Had a girl hanging on yr every word.
     
  9. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    IIGHT MY SISTA IMA KEEP U IN PRAYA CUZ WE ALL NEED IT
    AND TYMEZ R GETTIN HARDA
    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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