Black Poetry : the way i feel about you...

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  1. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :luvu: :luvu: :luvu: :luvu: :luvu: :luvu: :luvu:
    :luvu: :luvu: :luvu: :luvu: :luvu:

    Let's do a little math, you plus me?
    equals unconditional... our first
    conversation subtracting the fights,
    is perfect, like your very presence.

    you don't know how i feel, the
    way those butterflies flutter all
    over me, i can't help but to tell you
    that i'm... hopelessly fanatic...

    it's not an obsession this, thing i have,
    it's more of an overconfident confession,
    that i think i'm gonna spill
    because i can't hold this any longer.

    you think i'm just a friend, someone you met
    a while ago, but since i met your beauty,
    i fell in love in an.... instant of a minute
    make it seconds what the hell, i'm just
    in love.

    sometimes i my uddle, fuddle, i mean, muddle
    my words because you make me stutter.
    tell me you feel the same way?
    i don't wanna fake it anymore,
    i don't care about looking like a fool anymore,
    i just want you to understand the emotions
    running through me.

    i want to touch you, be touched by you,
    take walks with you and watch you sleep,
    i want you to wake me up with a kiss
    every morning and a thought in the evenings,

    all i'm asking you, is to listen and agree, that you feel the way...
    that i feel about you. :luvu: :luvu: :luvu:

    OK FAMILY, JUST WROTE THIS FOR MY DEAREST!!! YES, PLAINRHYTHM HAS FOUND LOVE!!!
    I'M SOOOO IN LOVVVVEEE!!!! OK BYE!
     
  2. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Found love and Im happy 4 you!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am very happy for you plainrhythm. I'm sure your dearest will appreciate this, it was very sweet and genuine poet of the week.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so sweet and beautiful and to the new love of ya heart
    surely one will treasure this
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Word, I'm in this place now too, plainrhythm. You expressed this so well.
     
  6. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you family!!!! i'm floating everywhere i go now!!!! cloud nine is the place to be!!! he hasn't read it yet, but i'm hoping he does soon...
    gempis, aaawww swweettt!!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love this..good luck in your new love and this was tight
    hold and treasure this scribe it was awesome......

    Peace
    Angel
     
  8. MissPoetik

    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what a great feeling. i'm happy for you and good luck!
     
  9. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    me happy to for you... :kiss1:



    and happy that you wrote this...


    i loved it sis...







    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
  10. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you sooo much!! goin on holiday with him so i'll be offline for a loooong time!!! love you all!!
     
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