Quiet Poetry Lounge : The Wave

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Jan 2, 2008.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Moving as one like the ocean waves
    Thrusting forward and back again
    The waves of the tides is high
    Deeper--- the vessel glides
    Bodies’ shivers
    Sweat cascade
    Dripping
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    Wet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'my shaking in the mist
    of the wetness and how the
    tides took me inward in ya
    grasp .......
    This was awesomely done and well verse
     
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    Wow Bluewater your word choice is excellent, this piece created such passionate fluid visuals.
     
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    Thank you so much
    Brother Rich and Sister Watzi
    Just testing the water..lol
    Once again thank you for your love
     
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