Black Poetry : THE WATCHER

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by seduction29, Dec 14, 2003.

  1. seduction29

    seduction29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HE WATCHES pt. 1


    I CAN'T SEE HIM BUT I KNOW HE WATCHES
    HE WANDERS IF THE WORDS I WRITE R ABOUT HIM
    HE WON'T ASK
    HE'S CAUTIOUS
    I CAN'T MAKE LOVE TO HIM PHYSICALLY
    BUT I KNOW 2 REACH HIS MENTAL CAPACITY
    IN A POETS WORLD
    THAT'S EVEN BETTER
    IF YOU CAN DO IT RIGHT
    THEIRS NO DISAPPOINTMENTS
    NOT EVER
    WHILE HE FEELS THROUGH MY THOUGHTS
    AND MY NAUGHTY SUGGESTIONS
    I'LL PUT ON THAT MAXWELL SONG THAT WE LIKE
    TO RELIEVE THE TENSION
    RELAX NOW DADDY TURN THE LIGHTS DOWN LOW
    AS THE SONG SAYS
    IT'S ON THE HUSH ONLY YOU AND I WILL KNOW
    R U READY TO GO UNDER?
    HE WATCHES
    WAITING FOR ME TO TAKE HIM TO THAT LEVEL
    THAT ONLY I AM CAPABLE OF
    SHHH LET MY WORDS WRAP AROUND YOU
    AND TOUCH THAT SPOT YOU LOVE
    HE WATCHES.........


    TO BE CONT'D
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was off the hook! Can't wait for part 2, and he'll still be watching...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out now this was the bomb !
    blow it on up pt.2 please...........
     
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    oh dis was tight flow girl flow....
     
  5. seduction29

    seduction29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PT 2 COMIN SOON

    THANKYOU ALL I WAS WAITING FOR THE RESPONSE B 4 I LET U HAVE PT 2..GLAD U ALL LIKED IT PT 2 IS GOING TO GET SLOPPY SO B ON THE LOOK OUT....29
     
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    let da ink drip and the sweetness run bring it on !!
     
  7. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Re: TO seduction29



    seduction29, presents great gifts
    All that this lovely female writes uplifts
    I see you through what you choose to write
    Reading your poems is a true delight

    Oh I added one stanza because of You
    After your reply it does ensue
    You know where to go to see the show
    Foreknow I knew not to continue though!
     
  8. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Niiiiice.

    Go 'head & do yo' thang.

    Waitin' 4 pt. 2.
     
  9. BaduX

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    Gone wit yo bad self...i really enjoyd this...
    GOD BLESS :wave:
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    most welcome.....drop part 2....likes ya style
     
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