Black Poetry : THE WATCHER PT. 3

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  1. seduction29

    seduction29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DON'T CHEAT YOURSELF BY READING THIS AND NOT PT1 OR 2..GET THE FULL VIBE PLEASE...HOPE U LIKE ...29

    THE WATCHER pt. 3

    HELPLESS
    YOUR FEAR ADDS EXCITEMENT
    MY TONGUE IS FINDING PLACES THAT HAVE NEVER
    SHOULD NEVER BE TASTED
    BUT THIS WAY THEIR R NO RULES
    SINCE THERE R NONE
    CAN I PULL OUT MY TOOLS?
    2 FREAKY?
    WHAT CAN U DO ABOUT IT?
    YOUR TIED UP AND UNDER MY CONTROL
    I HEARD YOU WHISPER OH SHI...
    MMMM U DON'T KNOW HOW MUCH THAT TURNS ME ON
    2 SEE U IN CONFUSION
    NOT KNOWING WHETHER TO 2 SCREAM IN PLEASURE
    OR CRY OUT IN PAIN
    HE WATCHES.....
    THE FACT THAT HE CAN'T SEE OR TOUCH ME IS DRIVING HIM INSANE
    WHAT HE DOESN'T KNOW IS I SEE HIM ALL THE TIME
    I KNOW HIS REAL NAME
    WE CROSSED PATHS IN THIS LIFETIME MAYBE ANOTHER
    AT THE TIME WE MET WE WANTED MORE
    DECISION WAS MADE THERE IS TOO MUCH AT RISK
    SO WE TURNED AWAY OUR DESIRES
    LIVING OUR LIVES OUT AS HAPPY LIARS
    I FOUND U HERE
    EXPLORING SOMETHING WE BOTH HOLD DEAR
    R U STILL WATCHING?
    WANDERING COULD IT B U?
    I WAS CAUGHT IN A TRANCE I DIDN'T SEE U BRAKE FREE
    ALL I KNOW IS YOU FLIPPED THE SCRIPT
    AND U WERE INSIDE OF ME
    THE PASSION THAT I DROVE
    WAS RETURNED 10 TIMES FOLD
    HE WHISPERED IN MY EAR
    WITH A SWEET TONE SO SEDUCTIVELY CLEAR
    HE SANG THE SONG
    THAT WAS PLAYING ALL ALONG
    HE SANG "KEEP HANGIN JUST A WHILE LONGER BABY"
    THAT FAST HE TOOK ME OVER THE TOP
    MY BODY QUAKED
    MY HEAD DROPPED
    AGAIN?
    HE WATCHES

    2 B CONTINUED

    COPYWRITTEN 2003
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    watching from above continue on pt.4
    bring it on tyte smooth scribing
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow..I guess some things are worth the wait...You're a very detailed writer...what more is in store?
     
  4. seduction29

    seduction29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS RICH & WATZINANAME

    I AM VERY DETAILED WHEN IT COMES TO LOVE SO IT MAKES IT EASY TO BE DETAILED WHEN WRITING IT...WHATS IN STORE FOR PT 4..I THINK IT'S TIME TO CONCLUDE...29...TIME TO MOVE ON TO ANOTHER LEVEL OF LOVE ...
     
  5. PositiveMindset

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    Well dayum cuzzin...

    I got one eye covered, but the other keeps readin'...

    Bring it, cuz' I'm diggin' it.

    And U know this, MAN.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes ya flava....
    wow..know this was tight....
    indeed smooth pen work...
     
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    whoa...sister
    your pen is smokin... :smokin:
     
  8. seduction29

    seduction29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKYOU ALL

    THANK YOU ALL...ONCE AGAIN..MUCH RESPECT TO YOU COUSIN PM.....NOTHIN BUT LOVE 4 U ANGELIC AND ANGEL....29
     
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    laughing ok :laugh:
    i am going to part one
    i be back
    Peace
     
  10. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ah yes
    very nice flow sister
    very nice indeed
    Peace
     
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