Black Poetry : The Wash Cloth

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Kwegan, Jan 13, 2004.

  1. Kwegan

    Kwegan Member MEMBER

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    An unprejudiced piece
    dangling from the corner
    tattered in the middle
    like sex was a coroner
    and it was her tool
    scrubbing tomorrow out of existence
    while today you couldn't loose.
    Unbiased piece of evidence
    against multiple partners
    you've been sharing
    love with, dick spit
    and a little of your ID,
    spotted with invisible
    bits of unwanted memories

    -that he don't want to share
    and she don't want to give,
    contaminated with a little
    lonely blues, some chunky
    heart on tawny string, she’s
    too young, and

    him's a mess
    his mother left him three months
    still on his chest and the
    baby mother won't stop
    crowding his desk, for some fat
    free milk and a designer dress,
    and

    her is rich in youth and love
    can't give up her treasure too
    quick, that’s the price women
    pay for love. Still in high school
    and the futures looking Bleak,
    with a three Month pregnancy
    under the sheets and a
    physically abusive dick-


    Dangling on the corner
    in his basement room
    torn in the middle
    from years of use
    invisible juices linger
    on as proof, that he's
    got major issues, but she's
    my muse
     
  2. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was very tight with beautiful imagery. I loved this. Much love to you for this.
     
  3. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kwegan

    A MAJOR TALENT SHOWN HERE...
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaa....
    love dis here flow on
     
  5. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes sista ya scribe is as powerful on paper as it is live on the mic...nice to see you in these parts :)
     
  6. Kwegan

    Kwegan Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for the consistant love. makes a sister feel good. :sand:
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bring it.

    Nice.
     
  8. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's slick. I never did get to welcome you to Destee. I've been a bad member lately, but I'll come back strong (but then again, I've been saying that for like 2 months)...it's a new year :)
     
  9. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im guilty of being a bad ,member myself:lol: but i really enjoyed your flow:)
     
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