Black Poetry : The Warmth of You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, May 24, 2005.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Entering into a world so new
    Something special made just for two
    Slipping into a wonderful mood
    Thinking of no one but you

    From the beam of your light I shine
    Looking into your brown eyes
    Seeing the reflection of my smile
    Feeling your desire rise

    Cheeks heated from the rush
    Is this the beginning of US ?

    From the warmth of your light I live
    Riding the comet without fear
    To become one with you my dear
    Your lips tenderly kiss of my ear
    Holding me so close so near

    From the beam of your light I grow
    Loving how you hold me close
    Awakening my senses into a fiery
    Body heated eyes now teary
    Making it last not in a hurry

    From the warmth of your light I write
    About how our union feel so right
    Loving how our love grown so tight
    Under the stars all through the night

    Yes I adore

    Having this moment, this time with you
    Creating a world made just for two
    With cascading stars, and a silvery moon

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed and under the glist of skies
    sweet love of two hearts suprise
    as they dip in the pool of affection
    in the eyes of caring compassion
    the warmth tingle deep
    to a foreverness sweep of love
    caressing the joy of two
    when it say me and u
    the gift of beauty instill in u
    the moment of light is so bright
    it light up the soulace of night
    when it's love ........................

    Tyte write sis
     
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    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    indeed this was a well written, well thought out piece and i enjoyed consuming it with my eyes, my heart and my soul.....This is tyte!
     
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    exceptional write poet. continue to make your presence known by such nice work. thank you for sharing.
     
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    Such a beautiful write of a warmth built for two. Nice to read something new from you Blue.
     
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    My thoughts, exactly!
     
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    Thank you so much
    $$RICH$$ :) ah yes, so wonderful to flow with ya.i will mo def be coming back, thank you so much for the love
    BlatinaPoet4u:) thank you so so much , i'm really happy that you enjoy my drop..:)
    Godssoulja :) ah wow..thank you , thank you, for sharing your love on my poem :)
    watzinaname :) thank you so much sister, i'm so rusty..lol..but like always i do indeed enjoy the vibes up in here..
    1poetsought :) i love it (((HUGS))) to you dear brother :) and thank you


    I really want to thank you all so much for your love and thought on my poem I
    don't know why I was so nervous about releasing this drop..
    cause i not feeling nothing but love

    Peace
     
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