Black Poetry : The waking up of a fool...

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  1. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I tried to let u go-twice.
    Each time u never let me. You promised.
    You write to me and say that my love makes your heart beat like paraffin stove...and my smile lights up a fire inside your heart.

    You tell me that together we can be eternal.
    I admit. I want u. Need u. Desire u all in my mind.
    My heart tells me to wait and see yet logic tells me I've seen enough.

    Its been over a month of excuses not having the time to see me. Yet my heart goes weak in the knees at the sound of your voice and when i read your correspondance, I obssess over it...but brotha, I think u are screwing me over!

    U said u would call...its 7pm. nothing. My heart tells me to stay at home and wait for that ring .logic tells me I'm all rung out..
    You are going away for half a month.But I haven't seen u for one so what another? You swear a truelly undying love for me, that u are no complete without me...that u love me like crazy, that I will always be your baby. Yet, brotha...I look around me and all I see is waiting, waiting, waiting...

    Need I maybe wake up now and see what everybody is already tired of looking at? Brotha, my heart is faint and weak from waiting and reasoning. You've never done nutin' special or real for me...and u don't even give me the chance to do anything for u..u just never around...

    U said u would call...its 7:10pm.

    My heart can no longer be sustained by the fact that u say u love me. I need to feel, touch, see, smell, taste u.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i feel ya deeply if he wont babe I will !
    speaketh self mind ....maybe he can hear ya thoughts .
     
  3. PoeticAlize

    PoeticAlize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i understand what you went through. but its better to wake up and realize than to stay in a bad/sad situation.
    keep blessin the board.
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    madd real mkhaya'lo - OH I"M FEELIN THIS RIGHT HEA!!!
    "I'm all rung out..waiting, waiting, waiting..."

    Honey chile he don't deserve you if he can't appreciate your Sacred Essence...for your True King will do all you expect of him and more to show you his Eternal Commitment of Undying Love!

    MANY BLESSINGS OF JOY PROSPERITY AND PATIENCE
    2fish
     
  5. Ladysoul

    Ladysoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can definitely relate to this. Just be happy that you realized now instead of a year and a half down the road like I did. Nice flow!!
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this good work
     
  7. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks guys...its going to be tough but hey......HOLD MY HAND EVERYBODY...for I really feel too weak to detox myself of this brotha! hold my hand everybody..

    lo'
     
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    let it out
    scream or shout
    but don't doubt
    there is a plan
    look to the higher man
     
  9. elayne.

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    lo'. lo'. lo'...


    my sistah... i'm not worried about you.
    & you know why? ...because you already
    recognize that you are not being treated
    the way you deserve... & it's only a
    matter of time before that "brotha" will
    either shape up or be given his walking
    papers. 'cause you're strong... so i'm not
    worried about you at all. :)

    thank you for sharing your soul...

    itsallLove.
     
  10. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Elayne, I think u feel me sista!!! Time will tell all my sista...they say distance makes the heart grows fonder...
     
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