Khasm13 : the wailing of a bard...

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  1. Khasm13

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    the traveling bard comes to town
    with his polished maple basiolet and sings
    each sping
    this poetic soul really knows how to do his thing
    songs of love
    songs of heartbreak
    songs sung in the pub
    songs of the taxation the king takes
    one off his songs caught my ear
    and seemed to bring the power of God near...



    Lord loan me thy strength
    cause this world makes no sense
    brother hates sister
    sister hates brother
    why do we choose to suffer
    when it's easier to love one another
    her brainwashed mind
    can't see mine
    and my brainwashed mind
    can't see that she is divine
    why are we all so blind
    O Lord let this please change
    in time...

    I want you to know
    that i love you all so....

    You are my queen
    and the soother of my soul....

    I have no control
    over how low some go...

    So lady take my hand
    and allow me to make your soul whole...
     
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    wow...this was just wow...ok ok
    i am speechless :angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Amen...............this was the prayer of hope indeed
    thanks for dis one .....big ups to dis
     
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    word...
    thanks mzblk and rich
    i grow weary of seeing
    black fols disrespect one another
    almost to the point of slumber....thanks again
    peace
    khasm
     
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    hi Khasm13,
    This was a really nice piece
    (actually...which of your pieces is not)

    Sigh...I wish somebody would sing for me like this.

    moham
     
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    indeed for some reason we beat and bash
    our own and just can't get along
    a big part in our daily struggle today
    man i agree it hurts and make me mad
    thanks for this drop
     
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    yes indeed
    brain wash
    true fact
    indeed
    Peace
     
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    Khasm, whoa brothah, this is so heartfelt. Lovin your flow and your message. Peace
     
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    ok now...ya got me ....and ya know i am never
    speechless..

    the depth of this
    da insight...
    the power it gave off
    my brother you out done ya self
    it speaks loud...
    its like love is lost...
    but if they no love themselves
    they cant love or show another

    i am feelin ya vibe this was a tight drop...
    lovin ya flow...lol can ya tell...speak brother....:angel1:
     
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    Whoa! (As i shake my head repeatedly)

    You really did it with this one, brother.

    Sometimes I feel like throwing in the towel, but then I remember, someone enlightened me to the point of my giving up my wicked ways.

    So, I have to do the same.

    I love this peace piece.

    Keep doing your thing, bruh, forreal!
     
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