Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ASHANTA, Jul 28, 2003.
Above life’s turmoil, true happiness,
The over coming of self,
da law of life .............well posed here
u scribe a reality of our beings
I see VOICES of LIFE ....
Moving thru adversity. Making up your own mind. Being yourself. Not giving up because storms are coming, times are hard..
Doing what you need to do even if the decision isn't popular or supported...
I feel you on this master- piece. Deep I will read it several times.
I was feelin' you on this. I have read plenty of your work and if you don't mind me saying I liked this one the best. It was deep yet smooth. The way a poem is meant to be flowed. I loved your others as well don't take it the wrong way because you know I have replied to quite a few but I liked this one the best. You truly got down on this one.
Thank you foxy we learn from others as I can learn from you thank you, blessings my brother the voice of life is the future of tomorrow.
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