Black Poetry : the voice of the wind

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  1. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Have you ever listened to the wind
    as it sings a melody through leaves
    creating a harmonious pathway to serene
    when you close your mind to the world;

    i like to capturee the quiet of still
    the moment when life cease to exist
    except for the momentary exhale of joy
    captured on the fingers of tall trees;

    you must close your eyes and lean into
    the world away from the hustle of life
    and quietly lean into a place of solitude
    found only on the embrace of whispers;

    i like to lay on the hill of my home and
    look up into the clear blue of midday
    just to see the paintings of clouds
    create the imagery of spiritual bliss;

    the coolness of September leaves me quiet
    in the midst of the summer as the breeze
    finds its' strength from the changing of
    the seasons and the newness of rebirth...

    one.
     
  2. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    twin,

    what's happening brother? this is nice bruh...looks like somethin' I would've wrote (ha ha)...yes...great minds do think alike.

    blak
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a beautiful piece...
    i'm feeling the serenity of the moment...
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man Mr.D i see u been working something sweet coz u laid
    out a mindful breeze of wind
    i love his piece..........hit us up one more !
     
  5. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for the read...

    twin, man i've been working like a slave lately... new career, new life, new everything...still preaching though...

    wildflower, thanks for the hit poet...it's always a pleasure...

    $$$RICH$$$, thanks poet...i have so much going on...i just read about your loss...forgive me for the delay...i send my prayers on the whisper of the breeze to you poet...

    one.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Mr. D thankz ....my holy brutha just keep me close in prayer
     
  7. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is lovely...sweet serenity....
     
  8. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i will poet...i will...

    LiLi....thank you for your read
     
  9. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    D

    You had me hangin on... I was waiting for more...lol Tight as usual

    Reas
     
  10. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the read Reason...didn't mean to leave you hangin'
     
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