Quiet Poetry Lounge : The Vibe that You Send

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Jun 20, 2004.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That vibe that you send
    coursing through me
    is so hard to put into words
    but I'm going to try...See,
    I'm lying in my bed, thinking
    random thoughts, when all
    of a sudden, an aura waves
    over my body, sent to enthrall,
    enwrap, in a rapture
    of pure
    sensual pulsation
    such an eerie, dreamlike
    yet vivid sensation
    causing feathery wisps
    to brush across my skin
    you'll never know what
    a trance this puts me in
    Or perhaps to you
    I do the same,
    causing those identical vibes.
    Whispering my name
    murmuring sweet nothings....
    Wow ... just the thought of it makes
    me smile and wonder how
    a vibe can travel
    through thin air
    I guess magical things can
    and do happen, if you really care.
    Still thinking about
    the vibe that you send...
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Airwave vibes...the best kind, because they're the strongest kind...
    very nice piece, I liked that...vibes...
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you liked the "vibe" here queentswana, I appreciate your support.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte stroke of the pen
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I appreciate your response Rich, thanks.
     
  6. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    a vibe sent me to this forum and had me read this poem..so
    the vibes he sends you must come , in part, from the creative vibes you be sending him.... the energy between you must be .........
    thanks for the flow
     
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    Sista Watz, Sista Watz, flow on girl!! I loved this piece
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, those vibes can be something else deepy, nice to know you felt this poem, thank you.
    Jazzymoonchild, thank you so much for letting me know you luv this piece.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yep...

    sometimes it gets good like that...lol

    love the way you do what you do... :bowdown:
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, sometimes it is like that indeed. Thank you sage for the strong support you give.
     
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