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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I've denounced you upon me
    as i speer eyez at your helm
    glazing rupet red velvet aglow
    as you sway down my memory

    The mellow of your walk capture me
    a ravish feeling embark on my soul
    i become your slave of love
    and the Kang to your mold

    The little secret of love between us
    is the deepest mysticof life
    each twist flash a new beginning
    you are a rare jewel on the crown

    I have kissed you, join lips wit yours
    driven irresistibly with great forces
    i could not escape the ecstasy
    of one extreme rapture

    My hands move rapidly back n' forth
    across the velvet touching your means
    as my guider arise me
    then yes wit closed eyes i abandon myself
    wit a sacred movement my body freeze

    I've love'd you beyond your feelings
    held myself out to you willingly
    to be nourished and fulfilled by thy love
    O' ye my beloveth of comforting
    stu in my grasp and da depth i so giveth

    I so loveth thy dress set forth you wear it well

    :ilu:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was oozing with the sweetness of warmth, care, and heart. Beautiful write.
     
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    Hi RICH
    Yes this flow was just wonderful
    I love velvet.
    And the way you wrote this piece.
    I could feel myself. Twirling
    Through each line.
    Wonderful

    Peace
     
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    Thankz watz and bluewater ........velvet feels so good to me
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    smh

    MAN That Dress MUST be Nice!!!
    I think you are about to melt!:lol:
     
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    lol @ PLATIUM ...not yet but something about red velvet
     
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    Sweet write Brother Rich!
     
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    Thank you the velvet took control
     
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