Black Poetry : The Veil in Detail, Part II, A Watz Elaboration Series, Inspired by Angelicsage

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Behold, the veil can be a foreshadowing....

    Born with a veil over the face
    a soothsayer, born to see.
    Many will seek your sage advice, for what's
    cloudy to most appears translucent to thee.
    A mystifying dream of the future
    can make you smile, or make you weep.
    Unfamiliar characters make appearances
    veiled in the psyche while you're asleep.
    A crystal ball holding the truth.
    An orb revealing tomorrow's tale.
    As the mist clears, and the images appear
    can you tell if you'll prosper or fail?
    Have a seat while the fortune teller
    shuffles your tarot cards of fate.
    Pick a card, any card, can you
    alter your destiny, or is it too late?
    If you knew what you knew now,
    and could go back into the past,
    would you relive your life so that this
    future turns out better than the last?
    Would you have waited to sleep with her?
    Would your husband be the same guy?
    Would you live each day to the fullest?
    Would you let your dreams wither and die?
    So many questions awaiting answers,
    for the prophecy of the veil to unfold....

    For behold, the veil can be a foreshadowing.....
     
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    If I could I would change some things,
    but some would remain the same,
    cuz those decisions in the past that I made
    has formed me into the man I am today.

    Feelin' this, patiently waitin' 4 the next installment.
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like you're at peace with who you are, that's a blessing, not everyone feels that way. Glad to know you were feeling this vibe, and waiting for more, thankyou Positivemindset.
     
  4. angelicsage

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    Sister...

    You really...I mean "really"...exceeded my expectations on this one...

    *OFFICIALLY WOWED*....

    You def' get a 10 for this one...

    I think I might have to jump in soon...

    you're inspiring me out of my slump, lol...

    Loved it, truly...
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I had to pause before I responded to you sage, you know you humble me so, your support means so much to me. Thank you from the heart, sis. I would love for you to jump in. Part III will reveal a darker side, and you know how my pen flows with that.....
     
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    Angelicsage inspires us all, and come to think of it... so do you. Very nice, indeed.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aww, now, you gonna make me run and hide my face, 1poetsought. Thank you so much for that deeply appreciated response.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very tyte deep scribing on da real
    wow !!!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for giving me the thumbs up on this one, Rich. Just going in deeper.
     
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    Whoaaaaaaaaaa :bowdown:
    NEXT PART PLEASE :D
     
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