Black Poetry : The Veil in Detail, Part I, a Watz Elaboration Series, Inspired by Angelicsage

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *This series is dedicated to Angelicsage, who convinced me that doing this series solo was not beyond me. So talented and unselfish is she.

    I am the Veil, I am the beginning....

    The emergence, a birth, the future
    crying out, struggling to inhale
    a new innocent life to mold
    a delicate being, so frail.
    I am in the images designed
    when this universe was created.
    The planets harmoniously aligned,
    and God's will meticulously mandated.
    I am the awakening,
    the dawning of a brand new day.
    The sun brilliantly rising, illuminating us
    with the warmth of each golden ray.
    I am the first bloom of spring,
    bursting in a colorful cascade
    abruptly erupting in a kaleidoscope
    that our good Lord has made.
    I am the instant replay, of our new
    millennium. As the frenzied crowd cheers,
    echoing infinite Happy New Years,
    yet another veil appears...

    I am the Veil, I am the beginning.
     
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    OOO! Really diggin part I, sis - most def lookin forward to the beauty of part II.
     
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    Elite supreme woman that you are, fear not the cerebral spirit filled genius inside.

    Let her out often through your quill to walk among us to be adored and honored.

    Great work Watz!!

    And that SAGE lady is awesomely inspiring, isn't she?? :heart:
     
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    tight drop....
    continue on
    peace angel
     
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    Ahhh yes you have been blessed by the SAGE :) and YOU have blessed us ALL with this my sista :)
     
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    Aaaah, the veil...

    Many look past the beauty held within it, but the enlightened clearly observe it.

    Nice, sister, I'm diggin' what you're workin' out of.
     
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    Sister...this was truly beautiful!
    ...you are an awesome scribe your poetic waters are limitless...truly

    Thank you sincerely for the dedication!

    Peace & Blessings Sister!


    :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you're diggin this gempis, thank you. I'll drop part 2 in a couple days.
    Quinessential1, you are humbling me so, thankyou, I'll try to continue the flow. And, yes, Sage is truly inspiring.
    Mzblkangel, thanks for your support.
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for your kind words, triniti, much appreciated.
    Happy to know you're enjoying this image of the veil, Positivemindset, thanks.
    Aw shucks, angelicsage, your compliments mean so much to me, and I thank You, for the inspiration, sista.
     
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    our sister
    you went deep
    with this scribe
    truly wonderful
    in many ways
    nice indeed
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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