Black Poetry : The Valentine's Proposition

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Her intent was to keep me forever
    locked in her heart with just one
    little kiss on those enchanting eves
    before the forthcoming lovers’ day

    So she had propositioned the manly
    sixth sense in me that made me
    feel as if this pious love plot was one
    not to be denied…and surely I didn’t

    Eagerly anticipating her placing her
    delicious mouth on me never felt nor
    tasted this damned good…I shivered
    as I swallowed her tongue wholly

    The subliminal inclination soon
    afterwards was to do a tongue dance with
    her; rhythmically tangoing to the steady
    beat of both of our hearts…

    Our eyes welled and flowed with tears
    of joy like the moisture of sweat beading
    down our backs after true lovemaking
    between passionate lovers…

    I had undoubtedly accepted her proposition then

    As the tongue play was sure to stimulate her
    femininity into orgiastic pleasure; I could
    visualize the faintest hint of her sweetest juices
    raining down into my parched throat when I
    venture exactly where she wants me

    I yearn for her nectar for it has quenched
    my thirst on many an arid night…an elixir
    that Cupid himself mixed to calmly soothe
    the burning desire we feel is ours to release

    Her proposition shall be remembered as a
    prelude to all the sensuousness we offer
    one another on Valentine’s Day; and henceforth
    is sure to cause earth shattering climaxes
    that quietly urge our souls to love
    strong and hard
    always…

    ©GQINC2K3


     
  2. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I absolutely loved the way you ended this ..another beautiful love peace from your pen...

    K
     
  3. elayne.

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    bighead.


    mmm mmm mmm!

    **** i hate that i cain't be your
    valentine this year!! :lol:
    (you DO be puttin' it down!!)

    itsallLove,
    elayne.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man ya making hearts melt
    nice vibe of love Q
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now you know good and dayum well

    this is an Instant Klassik..... GQ keep giving us the Quality keep giving us the Quality..




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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Ya'll!

    Hmm Zorb...a klassik? Thanks for thinking so!

    BG - Now you know you're my Valentine 3-6-5!!! :wink:

    K - It can be no other way!!! :kiss:

    $R - Isn't that the name of the game??? :toast:

    :peace:/:heart:
    GQ
     
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    Lovin this GQ.
     
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    i like the clincher.

    off the chain :toast:
     
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