Black Poetry : The Valentine's Gift

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What could I possibly
    give you on Valentine's
    Day?

    Shall I give you a dozen
    white roses to show my
    love for you?

    Each fragranced flower can
    be a lovely reminder of what
    you mean to me as you
    gently tug each petal
    and count the ways my
    love for you is deeply
    felt…

    But I won't give you roses

    I've felt the need to profess
    my heart's guilt; wanting the
    true sentence of love's
    wondrous labor; where the
    toil of capturing your
    sweetest touch is soothing
    in my mind

    I've yearned for the sincerity that
    love brings to my heart when
    I think of you during this day
    that lovers pray to the heavens
    above for such a love interest
    so real; a miracle love so true

    I won't give you candied sweets
    to show my affectionate taste
    for you because my mind savors
    the taste of you everyday

    Nor will I give you little hearts
    with silly messages written
    on them to describe my feelings
    no matter how cute

    I will always {feel} out loud for
    you because it's those words you
    should hear that's written on my
    heart and told with a softly
    placed kiss that speaks volumes

    I love you on this the day that cupid's
    arrow pierces many hearts and
    restores hope that love is a beautiful
    feeling

    What I can and will give you is my
    vow that everyday will be like this
    because your love has made it special
    for the both of us…

    I know that your undying love for me is
    surely the greatest gift of all of which
    I proudly give you in return…

    Happy Valentine's Day lover…

    ©GQINC2K2
     
  2. Rashad

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    Looks like cupid got a hold of ya!

    This will be a nice gift for a Lover and a Friend!
    Thanks for sharing the gift!:D
     
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    Nice read GQ
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GeeQue.


    ...you're like Cupid Incarnate, my dear! :)

    this was sweet!! thanks for sharin'.

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lol

    I think GA was right dog... you must be Cupin Incarnate! Keep em' comin Q!

    Much Respect
    Reas
     
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    R u just tryin to be cheap on V-Day?

    :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
    Just kidding! This was lovely GQ. I thoroughly
    enjoy reading such potent love scribes!!!!
     
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    Tight, brotha

    BRB
     
  8. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dani - the best things in life are free mos' def!!! :laugh:

    Thanks ya'll for the read!!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man hand ova ya love to her
    what more can she ask of u
     
  10. ShadeeLadee

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    I like what you saying here brotha!

    wow!

    SWT
     
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