Black Poetry : THE VACANCY

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  1. THETRUTH

    THETRUTH Active Member MEMBER

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    THE DARKNESS IS COLD
    YOUR BREATH FOGS THE WINDOW
    THE MOON SHINES SO BRIGHT SO DELICATELY AND TASTEFULLY
    THE ROOM DOESNT GLOW
    THE FEELING AND SENSE OF BARENESS
    THE KNOWLEDGE OF YOUR OWN ROOM
    THE SENSE OF VACANCY
    THUS FEAR IS BORN
    TAKING YOUR HEART AND MIND CAPTIVE
    HOPE IS STILL HIDING IN THAT LITTLE BOX
    OF PANDORAS IN THE BACK OF YOUR HEAD
    A DOOR OPENS AND A DEEP BREATH IS TAKIN
    AND A SILENT WHOS THERE IS FAKENED
    FINALLY A LIGHT AND A KISS
    AND FEAR BYE BYE AND YOU ARE DISMISSED
     
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    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I don't exactly know what this is about but I like the way you wrote it. It seems it doesn't really matter what it;s about because of the way it's written.
    THE SENSE OF VACANCY
    THUS FEAR IS BORN
    I love that.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling ya drop it spray wit a twisted affect
    flow on
     
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    indeed a twist
    likes the drop.....
     
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    Hope still resides although unseen...

    Fear only has strength if you let it...

    it's amazing how fear can strip you
    of your very being and keep the beauty...
    and trueness of "you" from showing through
    but in taking the first step to move beyond
    fear...it will forever recede... with each step taken
    proving that there only appears to be a vacancy...
    but hope still resides...

    Love the flow...
    Love the message I've found...even more!
     
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