Black Poetry : THE USER

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mistaliberator, Jul 30, 2005.

  1. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MAYBE I WANTED
    TO
    LOVE
    YOU
    YOU
    AND ONLY YOU

    PLEASE FORGIVE ME
    I GOT TROUBLE IN MIND

    AND I DECLINE
    TO BE THAT PIMP
    THAT PIMED HIS SELF
    AWAY
    FROM THE REALNESS OF HER BEAUTIFUL CONTENT

    PLEASE FPRGIVE ME BABY
    I GOT TROUBLE
    IN MIND

    FIGHTING AGINST MY SOUL
    JUST TO
    HOLD ON
    TO WHAT WAS LEFT
    TRYING NOT TO LET
    GO
    OF
    WHAT WAS FELT
    IN LOVE
    OUT OF LOVE
    OUT OF LOVE
    IN LOVE
    WE WEPT
    REFUSED USE YOU THE THIRD TIME AROUND
    PRAYING THAT GOD WOULD SEND HIS CHILD SOME HELP
    THEN WE GREW CONFUSED
    JUST IN IT FOR THE SEX OF YOUR SELF
    WE BOTH USED

    BEAUTIFUL RESOURCES

    LOVING THE USER
    WAS
    THE MAIN REASON YOU LEFT
    BUT I WAS ASHAMED OF MYSELF
    BECAUSE
    LOVING YOU WOULD HELP ME UNDERSTAND
    THAT DISTANT PART OF MYSELF
    MAYBE THIS TATTERED LOVED
    TRAVELED DOWN THE SAME RIDICULOUS
    HIGHWAY
    TO ONLY FIND THAT
    IT TRAVELED NO WHERE
    AND THAT SAME HIGHWAY
    BECAME A WAY TO ISOLATE




    MYSELF


    I REMAIN NOT IN LOVE
    BUT ABOVE LOVE
    NOT ABOVE LOVE
    BUT
    UNDER LOVE

    NOW I NEED THE LOVE


    MAYBE LOVING YOU
    WAS SOMETHING THAT I COULDNT AFFORD TO DO
    ONLY BECAUSE FOR THE FIRST TIME IN A LONG TIME
    I DIDNT WANT USE YOU FOR JUST MY CONVIENCE

    PLESE UNDERSTAND

    THE USER
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It seems as though the user finally realized himself as such, and wanted so much more for himself and his love than to be, used. This had an intense feel to it poet, as it should have, flow on.
     
  3. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I COULD USE YA..

    I COULD USE YOUR MIND,
    YOUR HEART,
    YOUR LOVE,
    YOUR SOUL..
    TO BOND,
    WITH MINE..
    TO HAVE AND HOLD,
    TO EMBRACE..
    MY BODY AS IF IT WERE GOLD,
    KILL HATE WITH LOVE,
    TO BREAK OUT OF THE MOLD..
    TO SPREAD MY WINGS..
    AND FLY WITH YOU,
    BECAUSE NOBODY ELSE
    MAKES ME FEEL HIGH,
    LIKE YOU..
    i COULD USE YA BABE..
    CAN U USE ME?

    EXCELLENT DROP..
    i HAD 2 SHOW U THE SUNNY SIDE OF COURSE.. :) JUST A LIL FREESTYLE
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt and heard ya on point !
     
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