Black Poetry : the untouchables

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  1. nytmama

    nytmama Member MEMBER

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    together we are untouchable
    apart we are incomplete
    my king and I
    true royalty

    together we are unstopable
    apart we are defeated
    my king and I
    a one man team

    together we are infinite
    apart we are meniscule
    my king and I
    the essence of tranquility

    together we are a nation
    built onthe premise of honesty
    my king and I
    truly

    together we are untouchable
    apart we are incomplete
    my king and I
    true divinity

    together we are we
    apart we are me
    my king and I
    the image of destiny
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o yes u and I

    unstopable // untouchable // very loveable
    our hearts with compassionate minds
    together we r
    yet apart we be
    still it's about u and me .............as one
    we stand tall........................................:kiss: :heart: :kiss:
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl,

    I felt you all the way on this beauty. The rhythm in this poem is superb. The essence of it, is magnificent. The uniqueness of your style is truly noteworthy. Don't you stop now.
     
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