Black Poetry : The Unspoken

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I dug deep into the furrow of
    Your womanly place
    Loosely kissing the Misses
    As each long stroke
    Knocked on her
    Cervix
    Apex’ing messages
    As Mr. Johnson
    Tingled
    In
    The depths of her throes

    She held me
    Deeply

    ~ Nestled
    In the warmth of her folds

    I froze

    As he let go

    And warmed-over “Blueprints”
    Set out on their “intent”
    To invade and Multiply
    Didn’t think to ask “Why”
    She let me ride her
    “Skin-to-skin”
    With no idea
    The world I live in

    She held me
    Deeply
    Massaging me
    As the core of our “Being”
    Co-mingled
    A Tingle
    Signaled
    The “WRONG” fear
    Expected
    …Had
    Neglected
    The first rule of Survival
    …Rejected
    In our hour of
    “I need you”
    Didn’t heed you
    When you tried…“Weakly”
    To stop me
    As you fell prey to
    Requests of
    I want to feel (you)
    …To see
    To look…inside
    Where “the little man in the boat” resides

    She cried
    When lips met lips
    ‘Til our hips
    Did a sensual
    “Bump-n-grind”
    I’d be lying
    If I said it wasn’t good
    Know I should (have)
    But how could (I have) waited a second more
    You talking ‘bout going to the store
    To pick up some
    But I said we didn’t need none
    …Didn’t want none
    Wanted to feel some
    Silky softness
    As I entertained your insides
    Never even tried to understand the
    “Future implications”
    Sexual relations
    Weren’t new to me
    ‘Twas nothing you could do to me
    That I didn’t want you to do

    I know
    HIV is the virus that causes AIDS
    But you haven’t played
    The games
    People with AIDS
    Have played
    Thought I’d be safe
    Where I laid

    Me loving you
    You loving me
    Didn’t want to see
    Didn’t want to hear
    What my conscience was telling me
    Coz jimmy hats seemed
    So uncool to me

    Did you know
    HIV can be contracted
    Through the exchange of
    Bodily fluids
    Saliva
    Blood
    Ejaculate

    I didn’t care
    I just wanted to share
    What I had to give
    With you
    I wanted to do it
    …Wanted to screw with
    The reckless abandonment
    Of the dangerous
    No one could come between us

    ~ For this one night ~

    It’ll be aiight…this one time
    I’ll get mine
    And I’d be gone
    Notched belt
    For my playa throne

    I stroked it long

    Late into the night
    Our cries of pleasures
    And sated sighs
    Brought tears to your eyes
    I thought were true
    Then…
    Six months later
    You told me the truth
    Of you

    ~ I’m HIV Positive ~

    I look back on my plans
    My dreams of “A family man”
    In corporate finance
    Now…I try to
    Understand
    How I so easily dismissed words like
    “Sexual abstinence”​
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Sometime we over look the facts in da pleasurement moments
    to eterlace and letter become a victim to life's deadly mold

    This was well done and i felt every lick of it fo sho.......wow !

    WAKE UP FOLKZ.....ya heard !!!
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Baller...

    Pregnancy and curable stds are no longer the unwanted when it comes to unprotected sex.
    Funny thing, most can be avoided if we’d think with what’s above the neck, instead of what’s
    below the waist.

    “Sexual abstinence” <---- Them some important words!

    You always do you so well and I always enjoy it!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sir $$RICHNE$$...

    ...those PLEASUREMENT MOMENTS only go so far. if they lead to doom, down the highway, were they really that PLEASURABLE? but, yes...WE DO GET CAUGHT UP. THANKS for reading.

    Ms Butta...if given a choice between PREGNANT and HIV POSITIVE, the choice would be PREGNANT everyday. THINGS DO CHANGE. however, i don't think it's a question of thinking below the waist...as much as doing what comes natural. JUST USE COMMON SENSE WHEN IT HAPPENS. THANKS for your words.

    and the river floweth.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    we're only human

    we take chances, chances on "feeling good"

    your poem is very profound

    and a wake up call

    thanks for the post poet
     
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    Deep...
    the power to overcome our desire at hot moments
    and think clearly is tuff, but when mastered
    can save a future(s)...
    This is some good poetry
    something to think about...
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    FELLAS...

    ...the choice is ours, yes, but is the prize--a night of pleasure--worth a life...when that same pleasure could have been obtained after clothing yourself?

    THANKS for reading.
     
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    Deep and passionate thoughts embraced me when I first started reading this, then the truth of how passion, can become so deadly when the body reaches the point of no return and when honesty has no truth to be told.

    I think most of us, have experience moments when we gave in to consequences and didn’t think of how we could be playing Russian roulette with our own lives.

    The message within your words was like a Stop sign in my thought and if nothing else a yield sign that will remind me to stop, think and use caution before proceeding.

    I thank you for sharing
     
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    There is no such thing as being too careful.
    Consider taking heed to words spoken.
    Consideration advice given. Not measured before considered. Is valuable advice. To Your flow...
    :terrific::bowdown::bowdown:

    You have some Great Talent baller.
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    FINDLOVEnMEback / HODEE...

    we've all found ourselves in those situations. FORTUNATELY, for me, i grew up in a time of FREE LOVE...a time when the worst thing you had to worry about could be taken care of with an antibiotic shot. HOW THINGS HAVE CHANGED. now, a touch of the wrong thing can kill us. I'M GLAD I DIDN'T HAVE TO COME THROUGH MY TEEN YEARS DURING THIS TIME. I PROBABLY WOULDN'T MAKE IT.:(

    THANKS for reading.
     
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