Black Poetry : THE UNSLEEPING

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by One9_Arch, Aug 27, 2007.

  1. One9_Arch

    One9_Arch Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I live life by the Code of the Millennium Rep-
    ...Resentative of God;
    Or better still ... We say Allah.

    Divine Mind ... Inspiration!
    Wake up to the fact that your Black livin' in a nation
    Ruled by the Wickedly wise
    Spliced twice ×2 ... Check the Truth of the Tribe.

    It's now known how the Black man Reigned in Peace
    How We've, raised and laid many nations in the sand
    How We civilized the people in the East of Our Lands.

    Gave'em Islam, "Religion," which they abused and perverted
    Being used to imprison through conquest, they've burdened
    The very conscience of the King of the Sun.
    We are the People of the OneGod, Tribe Of Shabazz.

    Tell me:

    Is it right to force another to remain in a subservient state of Existence?
    If he finds and declares a way to make himself whole, does his Declaration lack sufficient merit to hold?

    Is it true-

    That the very essence of a man is to be free?
    Or that the right to choose by God was given me?

    Is it true-

    That a man may choose to Revolt, peacefully?
    And to make this impossible, makes violence inevitable?

    Is it true-

    The mere fact that I was born in America doesn't mean that I relinquish my allegiance to doing Better than ... Those who would rather see me dead than Breath; and so the question is posed, "By what means?"

    To separate me from the part of my mind that makes me conscious of my Right!
    All else fails? You leave me no choice but to fight!

    To have my blood just dry up and rot (without so much as a reflection of me), is like standin' torpid, watchin' people hangin' from trees.

    To take the breath givin' ... Breathed into a lifeless soul
    Is to remove the form givin' by the God Who knows
    "It is, and so it shall be." Check the proposition:
    I Live , and so am free, and this is the position my mind decrees.

    Salaam!
     
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    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    strong questions...

    recieve strong answers and much opposition. Loved the flow and the cry for reparations. tell 'em about the king of the sun again, haha!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Freedom should be afforded to all. By any means necessary? That's our call. Such intensity in your words.
     
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    PEACE BE WITH YOU!
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes i feel you poet

    i don't do religion i did i one time trust me when i was searching for the truth

    and i found it but it wasn't in any book so to speak

    religion can do some good but i think it blocks you from seeing the true divinity

    the polar divinity the understanding to both sides of the divinity which in reality is

    very basic. it's up to you which side of the energy do you want to be on

    the positive or the negative.

    Islam is ok to me because i see the people who follow it have great discipline

    but again religion blocks you from seeing the true divinity the true basis of life

    like i tell people all time the good and the bad together

    the birth and rebirth of life and or energy flows


    i like your piece it asks so many profound questions

    and no being on earth is actually free is you may

    they (we) are all slaves to the physical universe

    peace