Black Poetry : The Unexpected Blessing.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by plainrhythm, Nov 15, 2004.

  1. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You just simply walked into my life, and thought
    it was gonna be easy. you were wrong, because
    i'm a complicated mishap, waiting to happen.
    you started conversation like, "yeah um... hi?"
    and it felt like the greatest intelligence in the world.

    Your poetry breathed life into me,
    your angelic like devilish controlled the words i typed,
    instantly i was drawn to you, like Polyanna to the Plague,
    you were a curse to evil and a blessing to me.

    My short words are simple, you can't start something and
    leave, because you're THEONE who came to me,
    and made me get down and beg you please...
    you're THEONE i hate for making my life beautiful,
    you're a blessing, unexpected, devil in disguise.

    just venting.
     
  2. naujae

    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoyed this drop
     
  3. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :driveby: :jawdrop:
    Very, Im see, hear ya, feel ya,
    Very
    Very
    NICE!
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love da flava of this venting emotions as it flow
    tyte drop
     
  5. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you family, much appreciated.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    likewise keep flowing bring scribe like dis ...most welcome plainrhythm
     
  7. angelicsage

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    Well...Well...Well...:jawdrop:

    Poet...all I can say is ...------------> :bowdown:

    You are one BAAAAAAD WRITER....

    What can I say...

    I'm humbled....

    Sage
     
  8. Nisa

    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To vent ..is to be healthy.. Thank you for your vent.
    :welldone:
     
  9. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you thank you thank you! far too kind!
    :grouphug:
     
  10. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    we be venting in haiku too...
    your flow was clear..
    and nice
    very nice
     
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