Black Poetry : The Ultimate Strife...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I’m stuck in the middle of my life
    Somewhere between joy and strife
    I don’t know what to say or do
    So all I do is live for you
    I can’t even think of what to write
    Cuz everything that flows, won’t come out right
    And I’m hesitant to say all that’s in my head
    So right now all I can do is lay with you in this bed
    And you put your loving arms around me
    Taking away all the troubles that abound me
    You slowly stroke the strands of my hair
    And with your beautiful eyes you slowly stare
    There is nothing that either of us can say
    That is going to start and take my pain away
    But there is a way you show me you love me tonight
    As both of our tears combine in alliance
    You touch me gently, caressing down the side of my face
    And hold me closely, never wanting to end embrace
    You kiss me over and over and over to capture my pain
    While rubbing me harder and harder to rub it away
    I’m stuck somewhere in the middle of my life
    But tonight, I forget about every single strife
    as we console each other so lovingly
    and as all our pain fades away in our lovemaking
    But this painlessness is only for tonight
    For tomorrow’s new skies bring the ultimate strife…
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this one i feel so deep inside
    i truely know , i'm in the same motions
    thank u for sharing this one
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks rich.......just some stuff that happened this week....i can't really write anymore...i'm in too much pain......and that hurts even more than chemo.....and i'm gonna stop before i start cryin'...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    allow self to free ya riddle pain
    i too feel u deep today forth i
    have a heavy load in my heart
    and my pain relive within me
    today is one of those days
    well felt truely u are ............
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks rich...that REALLY uplifted me...
     
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    My :heart: goes out to you Lovely. This is a beautiful piece. I am wishing you the best and can't wait until you bless us with more of the beauty of you!!

    Keeping you in my thoughts and prayers. :grouphug:
     
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    that is very beautiful Lovely. Keep your faith and stay strong sister. It's a lovely thing when you have someone to stand with you.
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is beautiful,
    im lovin it,
    its good to have someone to support u in hard times
    my blessing to u lovelygoldenone.

    peace
    -story
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alizentang, purple, and the story....

    thanks for sharing your beautiful words with me......i really appreciate it:D
     
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    This really relates to how I actually feel when sometimes I cant think of anything to write about and nothing seems like it's coming out right. It's mad hot yo I had to read it again and again, I'm really feelin it.
     
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