Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Keita Kenyatta, Dec 11, 2004.
This was the type of poem that, gee, I just had to sit back in my chair for a short spell, and just smile about the truth in it. For as well as the poets here do to express themselves, just as you did here, there is much that no matter how hard we try to convey it, it takes a back seat to experiencing life. I'm sure we all miss your words, you're such a talent, but nothing takes the place of the reality of life. This was beyond wonderful.
awesome scribe of what's deep inside
the in motion poem no words can say
flow on ! Sir K............
wonderful...as zora neal said "you got to go there to know there"
you expressed it so well..and it was real..the truth..
tain't no more to say...
just keep on living
as my dad use to say.....
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Keita your poem should be our creed!
Your style, your flow, your rhythm and speed
“Copyright” this plant from your muse and seed!
Fore this “great work” mounts an internet steed
or rest on a book page for all to read
Put there by some knave, hurrying to succeed!!
Some knave in a Hurry to feed his greed!!!!
Now go and seize the day!
awesome flowing....happy to be reading you again
this was tight and i enjoyed reading...Angel
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Let this one soar high in the clouds
Keita Great job again I must opine!
<--- bowing in humble regard. this was masterfully written and the flow was sick. keep doing what you do poet.
You never cease to amaze me...
or exceed my expectations
...You are a phenomenal poet
and anyone who has the pleasure
of reading you...
immediately knows it
Loved this piece!
Hey my brother u came withthe fire and the food on this one right here!
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