Black Poetry : THE ULTIMATE POEM

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Keita Kenyatta, Dec 11, 2004.

  1. Keita Kenyatta

    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was the type of poem that, gee, I just had to sit back in my chair for a short spell, and just smile about the truth in it. For as well as the poets here do to express themselves, just as you did here, there is much that no matter how hard we try to convey it, it takes a back seat to experiencing life. I'm sure we all miss your words, you're such a talent, but nothing takes the place of the reality of life. This was beyond wonderful.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome scribe of what's deep inside
    the in motion poem no words can say
    flow on ! Sir K............
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    wonderful...as zora neal said "you got to go there to know there"
    you expressed it so well..and it was real..the truth..
    tain't no more to say...
    just keep on living
    as my dad use to say.....
     
  5. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reply to Keita

    Keita your poem should be our creed!
    Your style, your flow, your rhythm and speed
    “Copyright” this plant from your muse and seed!
    Fore this “great work” mounts an internet steed
    or rest on a book page for all to read
    Put there by some knave, hurrying to succeed!!
    Some knave in a Hurry to feed his greed!!!!

    Sincerely
    ALPHA MALE
    Now go and seize the day!
     
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    awesome flowing....happy to be reading you again
    this was tight and i enjoyed reading...Angel
     
  7. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let this one soar high in the clouds
    Keita Great job again I must opine!
     
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    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    <--- bowing in humble regard. this was masterfully written and the flow was sick. keep doing what you do poet.

    Lyr1c
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You never cease to amaze me...
    or exceed my expectations
    ...You are a phenomenal poet
    and anyone who has the pleasure
    of reading you...
    immediately knows it

    Loved this piece!
     
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    :hearthis: Hey my brother u came withthe fire and the food on this one right here! :hearthis:
     
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