Quiet Poetry Lounge : the truth about perfume

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ShadeeLadee, May 19, 2002.

  1. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    he doesn't love her like you do
    I've been trying to put my finger on it
    and I think I've discovered the answer

    Not that anyone had a question
    It's just that I wondered sometimes
    who might love her more...

    she is like an expensive perfume
    very costly by the ounce
    and just like the treasure she is

    each drop of her essence blends
    specially upon those who feel her
    and no two fragrances are the same

    you don't love her like he does
    and once I put my finger on it
    I knew it was the truth

    SWT
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I would like to slip behind your eyes for a quick second....peep your mind....just one quick looksee luv...k?

    :D

    scribe chile!

    MMA :heart:
     
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    Illuminating!

    I was once given a similar analogy but with sea shells...
    something about them all being beautiful but different!
    And how you can enjoy one more than the other even
    though they are just sea shells, the real deal is I guess
    which one do you like the best!!!!!! Been asking myself
    this one all month...That was an eyeopener...is that why
    they keep coming back Shadee, did I leave some essence
    on em?????? Girl, you betta get out of my head!:eek:
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i've seen this in open vision....
    knoweth by far of heart da
    essence of beauty

    every one is lustfully grand
    yet all different .................

    dis piece was so sweet & carefully written ....
     
  5. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    she is one woman..she is every woman..she is all woman in every scents of the word....

    I like this one Shadee...

    k
     
  6. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all....

    MMA :heart: we won't "go there" :D

    Shade
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet hee hee hee

    Like your poetry
    Sincerely,
    Desert Storm
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm likin' this...
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is cool...the essence of a woman
    Peace
     
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