Black Poetry : The truth about me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Feb 16, 2003.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    They ..said I,m like poison...

    i had nothing more than love for you

    They said I,m like a parisite..

    I was nothing more than a butterfly who liked youre
    beautifull colours

    They said i,m like a sick child...

    What about a woman who just wanted to be around You

    They said i was forcing you to be my friend.......

    I was only responding on the things you said.

    They said i,m a heartbreaker.......

    The only time i broke someones heart was when i left the
    person who broke mine manny times

    They said that i was faking and pretending that i did,nt want to
    be with you...

    i wanted that so bad that i risked my life somthimes going into these rooms

    my heart cry,s out loud
    cry a river?
    i cry seas
    The truth .......
    the truth about me
    How could they say these things...
    without thinking that my heart wont bleed...

    they say the real truth hurts....
    i,m hurt because i see where this world is going to

    I dont care what they say anymore..
    But the Truth the truth about me
    lies
    with
    god.....
     
  2. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sorry uys i made amistake this schould be in tha Flow section no in this .....section...
     
  3. midnightsson

    midnightsson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the truth is liberty...that you're a poet and a woman. the people who say these things obviously overlooked these important things....but if God knows, thats all that matters..keep your head up liberty..
     
  4. Legacy21

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    I can identify with your pain Liberty. It's like Lauryn Hill's song "So Much To Say" So many people have so many things to say about, and may not even know you. People don't realize the power to hurt they have in their tongues, and sometimes don't even understand situations they speak on. You are indeed right that the truth of who you are are & your situation lies with you & God. That is the only thing that matters, so keep your head up, and put he naysayers behind you.
     
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    I like dis piece liberty, 4 sho:)

    AM
     
  6. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks guys Legacy its treu wat youre saying...
    Midnight....yeah they defenately overlooked
    Aliyahmonet..thanks...sista

    one day things will come to tha light...

    untill than ..

    i will take my time to heal

    a sad poet....
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    nice art
    and message

    things don't seem how they look
    and who cares what anybody sez about me anyway
    cause it don't mean nuffin.

    peace
    feeling ya poet

    DSS
     
  8. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks da street to ya.....
    i do care what they said.......
    cause i never got tha chance to be with someone
    i realy realy love...whom i see as my soulmate...
    and that hurts......................
    ...........................................
    A LOT......
    but youre right......i shouldt care about what they saying
    eventually truth stands longer than enything...
     
  9. ASHANTA

    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl don't hurt nobody this is great continue, this forum is full of wisdom.
     
  10. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks ashanta :heart:





    :teach: yeah i,m not finished things are not clear ..
     
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