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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it dont have one...
    just words in my head tryin to
    place them in order

    <<<Preachin of a Black Woman>>>
    check it!!! Got introduce to da game
    Just tryin ta maintain
    Cant blame just tame
    da game....
    day by day
    <<<LOOK>>>
    the knowledge you seek..
    Is with in
    Don’t gotta go far…
    <<<GAME OF LIFE>>>
    live ta die and die to live
    walk dis world on borrowed time
    workin fo betta
    strive to survive
    and raise the kids…
    misery is what I see
    look at da history
    destroy to live
    live to destroy
    holdin on to da bad parts
    not just fo ta day
    just livin on borrowed time
    round and round..
    Tryin ta hide….
    But it seeks ta find
    Wonderin
    Searchin
    Yearn
    WHY>>>>>>
    <<<A Blkangel Thang>>>
    don’t pass it by....
    as I walk back in to the light...
    hope ya day is brighter....
    slack on deceivin..
    Aim fo a higher cause..
    Take da weight off….
    raise ya head up...
    strive ta live....
    live to die...
    make this a betta place..
    Place ya anger on da side...
    Look at what you show
    OUR KIDS
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well expressed it show da face
    of what it is .....nice scribe
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well thanks Rich..i didnt think anyone would like it...
    :love:
     
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    this is tight
    sister
    i like
    nice flow
    Peace
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you sister Bluewater....much love glad you like it
     
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    it was scribe so well sistah Queen :star:
     
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    thankz again
     
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    Flowed like a poem to me, the children are our future, but I guess some are just too blind to see. Liked the way this was posed.
     
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