Black Poetry : The times in alliteration 2004 Pt. I

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    G dub's dangerously dancing with the devil
    while deceiving with doubletalked diction
    approval ratings rocket when word was received
    that they went back and picked up So d...a...m...n
    from where they put him
    propaganda pimps push packets of fear for bush
    now constituents constantly craving for a
    new world order / order which was ostrasized
    when money became the object
    oil men banking on bombs to fatten bank accounts
    in the future / fronting on democracy deviling the
    constitution / now everyones a patriot until the
    act acknowledges them as an active terrorist by false definition/

    poor boys and girls wanted support for college so they joined
    now they want support / to come home, but, they joined

    and more continue to die

    (c)2004 blakverb
     
  2. PositiveMindset

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    And that's what AmeriKKKa's banked on since the beginning, poor boys & girls seeing their military as their only way 2 achieve some semblance of opportunity.

    While Georgie Puss takes his family vacations on ranches & lakeside cabins, youth are losing their lives on the reg., fighting 4 this country's "freedom", yet the war was started in another country that had nothing 2 do with the attacks on AmeriKKKan soil.

    Very nice, mind opening piece, brother blak., keep 'em comin'.
     
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    man sho nuff on point coz it's like a rapid fire
    one by one being taken.......flow on speak
     
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    OH MAN, so very tight and real. It's crazy, why can't they come home? And why are they over there anyway, weren't they chasing Bin Laden?
     
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    dis dynomite dictation did double damage...word
    this was helly tight man...got [email protected]
    one love
    khasm
     
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    This piece really hit home because my sister is trapped in that. Thankfully she just got out of having to go to Iraq due to medical issues. Her son is 7 months old and they were trying to have her go to Iraq to do the same job Jessica Lynch was doing. Their deeds are truly dirty. Thank you brother.
     
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    I have a step brother in this situation, makes me wanna holla, thankyou for scribin this piece, blakverb.
     
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    ya know ya right
    tight drop...
    flow waitin on pt 2
     
  9. kente417mojo

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    All that's too true man. Sometimes we get blinded by what they let us see on the news. We believe everything that the TV dangles in front of us. Most forget that there are always things going on in this world that we will never hear about. We won't hear about them purposely. Those poor boys and girls is right. They are just chess pieces for the governments stupid games and petty acts of greed.
     
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    no doubt, man, that's the way it is right now and it's sad as hell. like the way you came with this truth, blakverb
     
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