Black Poetry : THE TIME IS NEAR

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by L.P, Jun 15, 2004.

  1. L.P

    L.P Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We are sinking deeper and deeper into holes of negativity,our understanding
    is melting like block of ice
    The coldest in our hearts is now affecting how we judge each others rights
    We have begun to applause ourselves showing no mercy,ignoring the words of God
    Master builders of darkness creating the pure devil heart
    Becoming lovers of destruction and brutality
    Blinded by greed imprisonment of the mind that once was free
    Living on the borders of good and evil survival in jeopardy
    Letting our ignorance conquer our true purpose peace
    The path we've have taken will become a journey of no return
    Our souls are on a definite course to burn
    Flowing down rivers with murdered words floating in deceit
    Soon our fate we will surely meet
    Disegarding the truth will not put a dent or slow down what is about to come
    We've painted ourselves in a corner now we must take responsibility of what we have done
    Life a precious gift from God but free will has killed compassion in the heart
    Suffering from I no it all we won't recover from the fall
    Crossing the lines we know we shouldn't take
    So be prepared to accept your fate
    The time is upon us
    Establish your relationship putting your faith in God
    The time is now to clean out your heart

    I hope what I'm about to say will not be taken in the wrong way
    I read you writers you are good
    But mostly you write about love but there is a core which you are over looking
    I love and enjoy the thing you write sometimes it's so deep I get lost
    Do you remember in school when the teacher said only if i could get little
    lonnie's attention
    Well your writing is getting a lot of attention
    You can always come back to love it will always be around
    You people are good
    This world is in serious troubled and writer like your self is the true saviors
    I know you are saying who give him the right
    But somebody got to say it
    The things in your mind is a God's gift meaning it should be put to use
    Believe it or not your minds are very powerful and the thing that you write
    help and not hurt
    So I'll stop before you put you thoughts around my neck
    Please and I will say it again Please bring out the words that need to be said
    IT IS A LOT OF LOST SOULS THAT NEED YOU
    BE SAFE
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep thoughts race to the mental
    ya so very much on point ....speak on L.P.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your message is heard, no offense taken, there is truth in your flow.
     
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    Very inspirational work you've presented here...
    No offense taken, we all have a voice in this house
    and we all speak on what we know...
    and sometimes we do need to be awakened
    in order to reach our fullest potential...
    many are called...few are chosen

    I feel you've been chosen...
    Continue to teach...I'll be listening :spinstar:

    Peace & Blessings to you for sharing your light with us :spinstar:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hear you loud and clear...and my ears are open to whatever you're saying. Thanks for giving us this part of your feelings.
     
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