Black Poetry : The thrill that kills

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  1. AACOOLDRE

    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Thrills that Kills
    By Andre Austin

    The thrill is gone
    When you feel alone with someone
    When you dream of another
    When your not with eacother

    I'm deeply in Love
    Like a foolish dove

    But its just not with you
    I'm speaking true of my voice
    Like the sky is rightly blue
    But I have the dilemma of choice

    I only want my eyes
    Looking into your eyes
    My tongue and lips
    Rushing, moisturizing into your lips

    Whats a man to do
    When picking between the two
    One is filled with dreams of thrills
    The other many hearts she kills
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's quite a predicament to be with one, while longing for the other. Time to make a choice. Nice to hear from you, and I hope to read more of your in depth poetry.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome scribing bruh u drop dis correct
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight drop
    love the flow
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    I';m with them....tough desicion but it must be made:)

    tight flow
     
  6. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmm this one brings back a lot of dark memories from my own pass. You hit this on the head! Much love poet.
     
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    word now dat's deep !!!!
    :bomb: :bomb: :bomb: :bomb: :jawdrop:
     
  8. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa, Poet of the Week! :jawdrop: Nice comeback
     
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