Black Poetry : The Three

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by true love, Jan 16, 2004.

  1. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    First there's Him
    The one I trust with all my heart
    The one I'll let get some at any time
    I'm not his
    But he's all mine
    Six years younger
    He loves me more than any other
    See, I can do no wrong
    In his eyes I'm an angel
    With a spit-shined halo
    Content with his head
    Between my legs
    'Nough said
    Is open up a little wider
    That's all I ever have to do
    That's Him

    Next there's the Ex
    Don't love him, don't trust him
    But d***, the sex!
    Enough to make your head pop
    Roll around, turn around then stop
    Never misses an op
    To make me scream
    Loves it when I cream
    Don't know what kind of drugs he's on
    Cause he can go for hours at a time
    Long as he don't stop by without useing his phone
    First
    We'll be just fine!
    That's the Ex

    Then there's the One
    Who I have nothing but love
    For
    He holds my heart in his hand
    Can't let him get any cause I couldn't stand
    To have him up and disappear
    He's on my mind like time
    And when he's near
    Nothing but fireworks and fast beating hearts up in here
    Makes me blush and smile
    When he touches my face
    Puts an arm aorund my waiste
    When he looks into my eyes
    I feel like the 1st Place Prize
    Leaves his scent on my clothes
    I walk around the house holding them to my nose!
    Yeah he's the One
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice flow.. True Love..

    Past to the present. Nothing less than :spinstar: true love :spinstar:
     
  3. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks Hodee.
     
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    tru dat...
    i hear ya...
    if i could piece all the relationships i had...
    a brain here
    a booty there
    a check book here
    and personality there
    then i'd have da one too :lol:

    this was supa tyte gurl
    one love
    khasm
     
  5. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks khasm...i'm glad you feel me on this! boy if i could make all 3 of them into 1 person, my life would be perfection! LOL
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this i s a nice flow
    yeah to have all 3
    would indeed be a nice package :)
    Peace
    Blue:heart:
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for feeling me Bluewater...much love.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister...
    you say things most sisters
    wouldn't dare...but hey
    the truth can sometimes
    be gruff...
    no matter what...
    this piece had that
    raw tytness...

    I'm feeling it...
    Woman to Woman...
    why should the men
    have all the fun...
    But If I were you...I'd be
    doing some serious investment into #3 :wink:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, number 3 does sound like the one....Those first 2, well, I guess I ain't mad at ya... :laugh:
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    true, I LUBS the way you put down this flow.
     
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