Black Poetry : The Threat Is Real

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Jan 26, 2004.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    They'd better leave us alone
    Before I write dis' poem
    Dealing in prose,
    Wit' some dirt tossed on

    Your plan?

    Man, I'm grown...
    Why we playing games
    I'll just say my peace
    Get the whole joint inflamed ~

    Go ahead!

    Rubber meets the road
    Where the grassroot
    Grows...
    You'd think they'd know
    For sure,
    Where not to go

    Alright!

    A brother breaks the seal
    On the inkwell swell
    And learned to spell
    L-i-g-h-t-n-i-n-g
    Raising hell

    Hey!

    The threat is real
    I decipher what's sealed
    From ballin' to calling
    We,
    Writing record deals!

    Say what!

    They'll learn to yield
    Afflicting such pain
    Once the ish you feel
    Can,
    Castrate their aim
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dig dat!!!!
    you a bad man with a pen
    flow on poet.....
    just flow
    tight drop indeed....

    peace
    Angel
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well then raise cain and write what you feel is real, keep flowin.
     
  4. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1poetsought,
    i really enjoyed your flow and message
    i'm absolutely intrigued with castrating the enemies' aims
    rendering them hopelessly impotent
    with zero ability to reproduce
    even interupting their ability to get anyting out of
    masterbation.
    Peace and Blessings
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well done speaks truth and reality within
    felt da message
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am trying to control
    a poetic battle flow
    your drop
    feeling it deep
    so deep it is bringing on steam
    thank you for this
    cause i am feeling it
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feelin this....
     
  8. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    For real tho'... thanks.
     
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